on Make a wish by thepinkbunnyofdoom
25 May 2003, 11:22 AM
"pour me a glass of apathy"
ha..great opening line..
..7?
ha..great opening line..
..7?
on haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY
1 Feb 2003, 6:21 AM
haha i love you.
on kruder&dorfmeister by rockinindividual
16 Apr 2003, 2:35 PM
I totally wish i hadn't given your other poems 10s..or 9s...or whatever...because i think this blows them ALL away..
I might have to think about this for awhile..because..i can't decide whether captitalization would work better for this one..I know it's not your style..but sometimes they flow better..or whatever..
I LOVE THIS!..mmm 10..i am thinking..
I might have to think about this for awhile..because..i can't decide whether captitalization would work better for this one..I know it's not your style..but sometimes they flow better..or whatever..
I LOVE THIS!..mmm 10..i am thinking..
on Dance With Me by marvelis
16 Apr 2003, 2:37 PM
i hate rhyming..but this was actually cool..
Actually, the last two lines were cool..
i'll widen my vocabulary, and give you a 5.
Actually, the last two lines were cool..
i'll widen my vocabulary, and give you a 5.
on this tuesday morning by teacup
10 Jan 2003, 5:56 PM
mmm...i like this. images that i can relate too.
don't you hate standing at the bus stop in the rain?
don't you hate standing at the bus stop in the rain?
on your voice soothes me in the dark by rockinindividual
4 Jan 2003, 7:46 PM
okay dudette, want me to quote the parts i like? i'll quote the whollllllllle poem...
looky looky! she's MY friend! MY genius friend!
I'll give it a ten....a bit impartial...but even if i hated you i'd give you a nine.
looky looky! she's MY friend! MY genius friend!
I'll give it a ten....a bit impartial...but even if i hated you i'd give you a nine.
on The unlucky Janitor haikus by Bachus
8 Feb 2003, 4:50 PM
...poor janitor...
What a killer ending..