poemranker ::20 most recent comments by blurryphotograph

Comments byblurryphotograph, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz 16 Apr 2003, 2:38 PM
10..because i say so..

What a killer ending..
on Make a wish by thepinkbunnyofdoom 25 May 2003, 11:22 AM
"pour me a glass of apathy"

ha..great opening line..

..7?
haha i love you.
on kruder&dorfmeister by rockinindividual 16 Apr 2003, 2:35 PM
I totally wish i hadn't given your other poems 10s..or 9s...or whatever...because i think this blows them ALL away..

I might have to think about this for awhile..because..i can't decide whether captitalization would work better for this one..I know it's not your style..but sometimes they flow better..or whatever..

I LOVE THIS!..mmm 10..i am thinking..
on Dance With Me by marvelis 16 Apr 2003, 2:37 PM
i hate rhyming..but this was actually cool..
Actually, the last two lines were cool..

i'll widen my vocabulary, and give you a 5.
on this tuesday morning by teacup 10 Jan 2003, 5:56 PM
mmm...i like this. images that i can relate too.

don't you hate standing at the bus stop in the rain?
on Lost Lamb by debased 5 Jan 2003, 8:08 AM
...sort of agree with the dude above me, but I love the first stanza. And the second for that matter...I'll think about the third for a bit...
okay dudette, want me to quote the parts i like? i'll quote the whollllllllle poem...

looky looky! she's MY friend! MY genius friend!

I'll give it a ten....a bit impartial...but even if i hated you i'd give you a nine.
on The unlucky Janitor haikus by Bachus 8 Feb 2003, 4:50 PM
...poor janitor...