| Re: null by Bill Z Bub |
10-Sep-03/6:55 AM |
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Mighty. Your kung-fu is awesome.
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11-Sep-03/9:16 AM |
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| Re: Lets Do Lunch (At Ground Zero) by scitz |
11-Sep-03/9:18 AM |
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The rant rated a 2, but the senryu gets 7.
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11-Sep-03/9:20 AM |
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It's like a really bad romance novel. Fabio=bad.
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| Re: A Fistful of Haiku in Yellow by HaikuMofo |
12-Sep-03/6:54 AM |
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Aww..cutie flower chick. you must find her. Who's the hottie in your room?
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| Re: A Fistful of Haiku in Yellow by HaikuMofo |
12-Sep-03/6:55 AM |
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The lobefucker one was delightful. i'm jealous you beat me to the subject.
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| Re: A Fistful of Haiku at School by HaikuMofo |
12-Sep-03/6:57 AM |
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Markie was wearing the skirt the other day. The word 'shanty' always makes me break into giggles. Now the computer lab's looking at me funny.
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| Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 |
12-Sep-03/7:11 AM |
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Gross. I smile. Flip flops for all.
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15-Sep-03/6:27 PM |
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Tekken isn't my bag, but if it were Guilty Gear, I'd be Faust.
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| Re: End of year poem by <~> |
16-Sep-03/9:13 AM |
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The stanza about September is wonderful.
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| Re: minotaur by Bill Z Bub |
22-Sep-03/11:41 AM |
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| Re: A Bucolic Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo |
22-Sep-03/5:49 PM |
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Nice one. Very nice indeed.
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| Re: A Meandering Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo |
22-Sep-03/5:57 PM |
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Nice. I like the Berserk one.
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| Re: Yoko and Sakura Make Love by William Delacroix |
22-Sep-03/5:59 PM |
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Girl on girl action that fails to even harden one nipple. FAIL!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Sep-03/6:19 PM |
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you know what this is, babe? *rubs thumb and forefinger together* It's the world's smallest violin playing the saddest song ever just for you and all the talentless sad little fucks whose feelings have been hurt. If your poemes blow bishops for bus fare, we call you on it. If you want unending praise on your tedious twaddle, tell it to your cat. Actually don't, that's animal abuse. In short, two points of order:1. Whine at someone who cares. 2. Eat me.
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| Re: Red by Brittanyy |
22-Sep-03/6:22 PM |
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Whine whine whine. What, did you break a nail? Shitty rhythm, shitty cliched images and the self pity supplied the flies and stink lines.
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| Re: Fall by Brittanyy |
22-Sep-03/6:23 PM |
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| Re: To Mom by Brittanyy |
22-Sep-03/6:28 PM |
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I considered being a nice person and not hassling you about your mom (I have a target for that), thereby skipping this poem. However, I read it. You owe me thirty seconds of a perfectly miserbable life. I'd just like to say I agree with Mr. Dreamer. Also, if you held the knife above your head, the angle would likely cause the blade to bounce off your rib or more likely collarbone and you'd just cut off your tit. Not saying that wouldn't be an idea. By the way, nobody does care. Except sliver, but he doesn't count. Likely just wants in your pimply panties anyway.
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23-Sep-03/6:04 AM |
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It does make me feel all fuzzy in my special areas, yes. Now, I told you what was wrong with your shit. Don't kill the messenger. Write less shit. I haven't called you one name yet, you silly tart. Now I have. Yet again, with emphasis: If you don't like it here, leave. Go back to the safe poeme-snuggles you would enjoy more. Also, please fuck yourself six ways from Sunday while you're at it. Hugs 'n' Kisses! Last, this isn't a poem.
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23-Sep-03/9:21 AM |
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Nice poem. Pieces of the intended target are good, but there is some division over whether they are necessary. Some of the best spite-magic is spurred by spite alone. I like botany.
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