| Re: Looking Down by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
14-Apr-03/2:03 PM |
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Wow it makes a lot more sense now!
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| Re: Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
16-Apr-03/1:29 PM |
Kinda cRaZy but then i guess thats the whole point huh?
Sometimes on this site i start to wonder how at what point does something stop being a poem and just because the writer says its a poem does that mean it actually is or is it just some words strung together?
just a thought.
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| Re: Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger |
18-Apr-03/7:11 AM |
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OOOOH yay a poem by you that i like! well done! -8- (i am stingey - but its a very high 8!)
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| Re: Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger |
18-Apr-03/7:15 AM |
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And YOU ARE jesus! he is!
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19-Apr-03/5:10 AM |
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19-Apr-03/5:13 AM |
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oooooh thats not bad at all!
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| Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
19-Apr-03/5:19 AM |
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yeah its very good. but then you are
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Apr-03/6:40 AM |
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(Groan) Dont start. I dont think i am able to define what is and isnt a poem - i merely question it.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Apr-03/7:06 AM |
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I didnt say anything about dancing!
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23-Apr-03/1:53 PM |
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Settle!!! why on earth did u change ur name to dark angel? This is going to be seroisly confusing for everone now you know!!
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26-Apr-03/2:14 PM |
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I dont understaand why people are writing wierd things about completion dates and stuff. WHY????? but i feel i must congradulate u on finally getting a wanking award - WHAT TOOK THEM SO FUCKING LONG?
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26-Apr-03/2:20 PM |
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You are Lord Ganus as well. That is the only hexplanation for ur continuing advertisment of him. GOOD POEM THO!
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| Re: Dumb Ideas by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
3-May-03/10:19 AM |
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The first verse up to the last 2 lines are good, as are the last two verses but the second verse doesnt work really -the first line is good i dont think you need 'groan' in the second line. 'Song' and 'along' ryhme a bit too obviously too. But it is a very good idea and i like the structure and some of the lines are great! especialy the last 2 lines on verses 3 and 4. :o)
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| Re: I must be out of my mind by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
10-May-03/5:55 AM |
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| Re: Typical Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
16-May-03/12:40 PM |
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| Re: The Outcry by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
4-Jun-03/9:00 AM |
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| Re: The other side of a rainbow by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
4-Jun-03/9:02 AM |
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I like ur picture - not how i thought ud look at all but hey im not psycic!
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| Re: KAT 2 by nentwined |
7-Jun-03/3:03 AM |
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My name is kat can it be about me? (o:
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| Re: Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
8-Jun-03/5:02 AM |
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Isnt God alive? oh no ive been living my life with the impresssion he was!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Jun-03/8:26 AM |
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A simply beautiful poeme, er poem - im sorry i was not around to see the origional.
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