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The other side of a rainbow (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
All the white clouds have turned gray From the darkest points come the lightning with its brilliance Fully charged with pure angry honesty Shouting loud enough absolutely clear for the world to hear Only to be drowned out by the rain These are the troubled waters that fall and surround us As I stand at the mercy of this storm that was once a bright and sunny day I have to wonder if the darkness will ever fade

Up the ladder: a bossom
Down the ladder: Pot Haikus (Ode to Stoners)

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.428571
Weighted score: 6.775428
Overall Rank: 434
Posted: May 27, 2003 12:34 PM PDT; Last modified: May 27, 2003 1:04 PM PDT
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[8] Blue Magpie @ 62.176.75.135 | 27-May-03/8:39 PM | Reply
Not bad imagery here. I like it.
[10] deleted user @ 63.237.171.69 | 28-May-03/12:01 AM | Reply
Good Good Good Good Perfect. Working hard.
[0] lunar @ 195.92.67.75 | 4-Jun-03/9:02 AM | Reply
I like ur picture - not how i thought ud look at all but hey im not psycic!
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