|
|
The other side of a rainbow (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
All the white clouds have turned gray
From the darkest points come the lightning with its brilliance
Fully charged with pure angry honesty
Shouting loud enough absolutely clear for the world to hear
Only to be drowned out by the rain
These are the troubled waters that fall and surround us
As I stand at the mercy of this storm that was once a bright and sunny
day
I have to wonder if the darkness will ever fade
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
5 | 3 |
9 |
|
0 | 1 |
8 |
|
1 | 0 |
7 |
|
0 | 1 |
6 |
|
0 | 0 |
5 |
|
0 | 0 |
4 |
|
0 | 0 |
3 |
|
0 | 0 |
2 |
|
0 | 0 |
1 |
|
0 | 0 |
0 |
|
2 | 1 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 7.428571
Weighted score: 6.775428
Overall Rank: 434
Posted: May 27, 2003 12:34 PM PDT; Last modified: May 27, 2003 1:04 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
266 view(s)
|