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a bossom (Free verse) by flames777
Behind that gold crested chamber Rest your serene unleavened divinity A risen old creed of your last feast -living word that breeds men I asked... Could there be a faith More gray,genetic and Alive as this sacrament? Your enclosed flame; Burns of wax and incense Flickers a steady light Unmoved by protesting breeze I heared, You are the iris of the tebernacle No wonder your closed lid Signs a mediating semester: Sick souls kneel Mumbling lips, Motioned faces... Stringed beeds dangle In several strands Devotion...so amazing Ooh!mysteries of the altar Such wholesome grace You dispense without cost Do allow me A whole day in your bossom "and surely" Yesterday shall pass over me.


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8095236
Weighted score: 6.7769775
Overall Rank: 432
Posted: August 30, 2009 7:23 AM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2009 7:23 AM PDT
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