| Re: Love Poem by josiefiend |
31-Oct-03/3:18 PM |
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Disturbing visuals, and the style's a little raw, but good.
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| Re: a comment on A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades |
31-Oct-03/9:21 AM |
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I don't think our outlook is too different. I think we have alot of common ground spiritually speaking and there is no doubt to me that emotions are the fundamental building blocks to poetry and everything else that gives us meaning in this life. Emotion is everything to me. I am sorry to have offended you. Just so you know, I only tease the people who I find interesting and worthwhile.
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| Re: a comment on A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades |
31-Oct-03/8:26 AM |
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I didn't trivialise your emotions. I was taking a friendly stab at you. I appreciated all your thoughts, but we can only be ourselves, not how you want us to be. I would suggest to you to do a little less directing and have more patience with responses of others. We don't all see the world in the same light. Some people are more serious, others have more of a balance. I've got a sense of humor. That doesn't mean I don't take people seriously, it just means life shouldn't be taken too seriously.
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| Re: a comment on A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades |
30-Oct-03/8:51 PM |
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I didn't think what I said was out of line. I was just trying to be friendly. Could it be possible you are being a tad bit sensitive? Anyhow, life's too short, you're not the joking type, dully noted.
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| Re: a comment on A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades |
30-Oct-03/3:24 PM |
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Should I thank you or 'think you'? ;)
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| Re: a comment on Through Poetry by newdawnfades |
30-Oct-03/7:36 AM |
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Originality is a beautiful thing. Now if you can tell me where you put it that would be a big help. ;)
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| Re: a comment on Through Poetry by newdawnfades |
29-Oct-03/2:42 PM |
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I haven't invested in a pair, but I like the idea. My version of 'poetry shoes' are a mocha in hand and my favorite mood enhancing music in my ear. These are some of the devices that transport me to where I need to be to get into the writing zone.
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| Re: a comment on Through Poetry by newdawnfades |
29-Oct-03/2:39 PM |
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I think I am working my way from the shore. At this point in my life I am only now pursuing alot of the things I never had the chance or courage to do. I don't think I have ever felt more free than now. So my journey is only now beginning.
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| Re: a comment on Through Poetry by newdawnfades |
29-Oct-03/10:56 AM |
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I agree wholeheartedly! Well said, and thanks for the vote!
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| Re: a comment on The World Is No Longer Silent by newdawnfades |
29-Oct-03/9:54 AM |
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Thanks for your opinion. I certainly don't agree with everything, but glad you took the time.
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| Re: As It Is by Miggy |
29-Oct-03/9:44 AM |
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Doesn't quite flow as smoothly as it could. It could be better.
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| Re: The Box by EouSou |
29-Oct-03/9:41 AM |
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I liked the last sentence, the rest has a little too much cliche to it
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| Re: a comment on leaving by windlessbreez |
28-Oct-03/2:56 PM |
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I liked it. It reflected that side of us that we hide from others, and it did it well.
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| Re: goodbye? by windlessbreez |
28-Oct-03/12:24 PM |
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Nice ending, i'd work on the rest however.
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| Re: Through Poetry by newdawnfades |
28-Oct-03/8:20 AM |
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| Re: a comment on A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades |
28-Oct-03/8:20 AM |
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Not quite, but you may have a poem of your own there.
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| Re: a comment on The World Is No Longer Silent by newdawnfades |
28-Oct-03/8:19 AM |
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| Re: a comment on untitled # 1 by noonewantstobealone |
27-Oct-03/4:19 PM |
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I was totally feeling this poem until it ended with 'and laugh'. I suggest you pursue an ending that exploits that closeness with the other person.
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| Re: a comment on The Same by newdawnfades |
19-Sep-03/12:21 PM |
Excellent! It looks like you have some background in bio-psychology! I will have to russle up my references, as I graduated almost a year ago, but I am more from the Cognitive perspective, which sheds some light in how we have a different take on memory.
Give me a little time and i'll be back with my references. I am going to have to peruse those papers you posted as well.
Regards,
NDF
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| Re: a comment on A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades |
19-Sep-03/9:36 AM |
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Yes actually, but it was more of a mental and emotional fracture.
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