Poemranker [Poem: leaving] [by windlessbreez] Thu Nov 21 16:22:17 PST 2024

the things i havnt told you will soon surface from beneath my skin the things i havnt told you will haunt me from within the things i havnt told you will make this our end soon to come and it will be done you will know the old me what ive been through hasnt been fun so let it go, as i drift into the sun.... (still no good names)

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Up the ladder: A Fool's Errand

Down the ladder: Don't Let Your Ass Get Hit By the Door

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5682

Posted: October 27, 2003 7:15 PM PST; Last modified: October 27, 2003 7:15 PM PST
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[n/a] richa @ 81.178.226.129 | 28-Oct-03/7:10 AM | Reply

this is too generic, perhaps if you wrote something more creative a title would jump out at you (and the reader).

The style is pretty good/ readable in both your poems I think.

[8] newdawnfades @ 128.208.65.134 > richa | 28-Oct-03/2:56 PM | Reply

I liked it. It reflected that side of us that we hide from others, and it did it well.

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