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Samurai (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer Trod 'pon me,
let my blood flow
onto the dead grass;
but remember my face
as you step on it,
so that it haunts you
till you meet death--
then I shall trod
upon you.
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Posted: May 2, 2004 12:04 AM PDT; Last modified: May 2, 2004 12:04 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5683 Comments:
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Joe-joe @ 68.194.47.34
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2-May-04/6:06 AM
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Payback is a bitch, isn't it?
Good, but why 'pon, not upon?
'pon sounded better on the first line in my opinion.
Succinctly put. 'pon for a samurai though? Is he an Englishe gentleman samurai.
Well, no, but I was mainly inspired by the movie "The Last Samurai".
Have you been watching Kill Bill? This is delightfully absurd in the same manner.
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