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Samurai (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
Trod 'pon me, let my blood flow onto the dead grass; but remember my face as you step on it, so that it haunts you till you meet death-- then I shall trod upon you.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5646
Posted: May 2, 2004 12:04 AM PDT; Last modified: May 2, 2004 12:04 AM PDT
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[n/a] Joe-joe @ 68.194.47.34 | 2-May-04/6:06 AM | Reply
Payback is a bitch, isn't it?
[9] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 2-May-04/8:54 AM | Reply
Good, but why 'pon, not upon?
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.163.180 > deleted user | 4-May-04/2:09 AM | Reply
'pon sounded better on the first line in my opinion.
[8] richa @ 81.178.232.136 | 3-May-04/1:11 PM | Reply
Succinctly put. 'pon for a samurai though? Is he an Englishe gentleman samurai.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.163.180 > richa | 4-May-04/2:11 AM | Reply
Well, no, but I was mainly inspired by the movie "The Last Samurai".
[6] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.30 | 4-May-04/2:22 AM | Reply
Have you been watching Kill Bill? This is delightfully absurd in the same manner.
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