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Free verse № 99840

Samurai

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 May 2004 · 6 comments

Trod 'pon me, let my blood flow onto the dead grass; but remember my face as you step on it, so that it haunts you till you meet death-- then I shall trod upon you.

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6 comments

[n/a] Joe-joe 2-May-04/6:06 AM Reply
Payback is a bitch, isn't it?
[9] deleted user 2-May-04/8:54 AM Reply
Good, but why 'pon, not upon?
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › deleted user 4-May-04/2:09 AM Reply
'pon sounded better on the first line in my opinion.
[8] richa 3-May-04/1:11 PM Reply
Succinctly put. 'pon for a samurai though? Is he an Englishe gentleman samurai.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › richa 4-May-04/2:11 AM Reply
Well, no, but I was mainly inspired by the movie "The Last Samurai".
[6] Nicholas Jones 4-May-04/2:22 AM Reply
Have you been watching Kill Bill? This is delightfully absurd in the same manner.