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Samurai (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

Trod 'pon me, let my blood flow onto the dead grass; but remember my face as you step on it, so that it haunts you till you meet death-- then I shall trod upon you.

hypatia 2-May-04/8:54 AM
Good, but why 'pon, not upon?

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