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Samurai (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

Trod 'pon me, let my blood flow onto the dead grass; but remember my face as you step on it, so that it haunts you till you meet death-- then I shall trod upon you.

SupremeDreamer 4-May-04/2:09 AM
'pon sounded better on the first line in my opinion.




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