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leaving (Free verse) by windlessbreez

the things i havnt told you will soon surface from beneath my skin the things i havnt told you will haunt me from within the things i havnt told you will make this our end soon to come and it will be done you will know the old me what ive been through hasnt been fun so let it go, as i drift into the sun.... (still no good names)

richa 28-Oct-03/7:10 AM
this is too generic, perhaps if you wrote something more creative a title would jump out at you (and the reader).

The style is pretty good/ readable in both your poems I think.




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