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goodbye? (Free verse) by windlessbreez your crippled screams
begging for fogivness
but nothing comes out
it's consuming
i fear to be myself
or anyone else
time to die
say your goodbyes
im just wondering why?
(coudnt think of a good name)
Up the ladder:
In the Cold Waste
Down the ladder:
Battered and Bruised
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Posted: October 27, 2003 7:13 PM PST; Last modified: October 27, 2003 7:13 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7913947 Overall Rank: 11240 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.116.54
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27-Oct-03/7:42 PM
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Shit, you couldn't think of a good poem neither.
Nice ending, i'd work on the rest however.
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