goodbye?

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Oct 2003 · 2 comments

your crippled screams begging for fogivness but nothing comes out it's consuming i fear to be myself or anyone else time to die say your goodbyes im just wondering why? (coudnt think of a good name)

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[n/a] Bachus 27-Oct-03/7:42 PM Reply

Shit, you couldn't think of a good poem neither.

[4] newdawnfades 28-Oct-03/12:24 PM Reply

Nice ending, i'd work on the rest however.