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goodbye? (Free verse) by windlessbreez

your crippled screams begging for fogivness but nothing comes out it's consuming i fear to be myself or anyone else time to die say your goodbyes im just wondering why? (coudnt think of a good name)

newdawnfades 28-Oct-03/12:24 PM
Nice ending, i'd work on the rest however.




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