replying on Mind of War by t_t_redhot
17 Dec 2002, 8:42 PM
Thanks for that wedsite too. I am enjoying reading the poems from this Rice guy. He can really paint a picture for you.
replying on Mind of War by t_t_redhot
17 Dec 2002, 8:37 PM
Hey what do you expect I am a woman being dramatic is my life. I live with drama in my job everyday so way not put it is words that best describes it. Thanks again, Tiffany
replying on Mind of War by t_t_redhot
17 Dec 2002, 8:19 PM
Thank you both for the comments, even if I have no clue who the hell Stans Rice is. Most people don't really understand what my point is. All it is about is the war of thoughts, feeling, regrets, anger, and lack of control over one's life. Very simple but put into word and phrases that can paint you a picture of a real war. But thankyou both again.
replying on Little Girl and Mom's mistake by t_t_redhot
6 Nov 2002, 6:41 AM
There is many types of poems. Most of which people will not understand. I could not put everything I saw in this poem because it would become too graffic. How many people would want to hear that when I walked up to that little girl that I saw brain matter, blood comming from her ears, nose, mouth, and eyes. I tryed to let people know that what had happened was because her mom did put her in a car seat. Her life could have been saved for that reason, and to show the irony, when one person dies others learn from it and try not to make that mistake. hint the last 4 lines. I am sorry I did not put all the bloody things that I saw in this poem but maybe what one person likes, others don't.
replying on Head-on Collision (True story) by t_t_redhot
5 Nov 2002, 7:23 PM
So i have to move on tells you that the child can not be saved. so why stick around when you can go help someone who can be saved.
replying on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot
4 Nov 2002, 8:24 AM
well to tell you the truth this is only the first time i have ever written anything like this but after getting the comments i have gotten it will not be the last. this one is only the start. check out my new one i wrote last night. and tell me what you think. it is called head-on collision. i would really like to know what you think of that one cause i ain't sure about it.
replying on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot
4 Nov 2002, 7:55 AM
well, unless you are in the medical field you don't realize how bad it is to find something like that. haveing to chose who to save and who to leave. it is something you only think about if your not in the field, but it is something i do. so i can understand where you would not be shocked by it. thanks again.
replying on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot
4 Nov 2002, 7:41 AM
the reason it might not have shocked you is maybe you don't understand it. i know the words are hard to understand for some people. but thank you for reading it anyways.
on Anguish by unknown
3 Nov 2002, 9:10 PM
very well writen. sounds like my home life.
on Stranger by feathers68
3 Nov 2002, 8:59 PM
Very good. it really tells how we see ourselves when we try to find what we are about.
on Down Again by Birdman42s
3 Nov 2002, 5:14 PM
It is great. I think it explains how everyone feels at one time or another.
on Two Towers by Tascobar
28 Oct 2002, 6:53 AM
it is amazing how you could talk bad about my work when what you write has no real meaning. simple it may be but anyone can write a few line down and call it a poem.