| Re: a comment on The cheating wife haiku by ~incarnate~ |
23-Sep-03/11:16 AM |
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A haiku is based on an old form of Japanese poetry. It is usually a poem written in 3 lines with a rhythm of 5-7-5. I.e. 5 words on the 1st line, 7 on the second and 5 on the last. All the words in the poem are linked and are essential to the poem. There is a better explanation on this site, Kaolin fire has it somewhere under poems. Thanks. :) have a good one.
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| Re: a comment on alone in winter by ~incarnate~ |
5-Jul-03/12:38 AM |
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Ha ha, that's what i was going for.
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| Re: a comment on La salle de couvée by ~incarnate~ |
5-Jul-03/12:36 AM |
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| Re: A Haiku-cum-thingy (really) by Bobjim |
7-Apr-03/5:03 PM |
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That's so sickening you'd make a gay person straight so they don't have to be sexually interested in this poem. Here's 0 for pissing me off in my computer class.
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| Re: a comment on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ |
7-Apr-03/4:54 PM |
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I thought he was a hobbit.
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| Re: affirmative action by thelonefrobros |
7-Apr-03/4:35 PM |
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does someone have a pincer so i can pluck out my eyes?
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| Re: isms and ities by Amelia |
7-Apr-03/4:23 PM |
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Hey guys, she's having a major problem with line 4, do have any ideas for it? Suggestions are welcome, just don't insult the writer. Please and thankyou.
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| Re: a comment on For the boyfriend I don't have by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/1:12 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/10:51 AM |
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Hey aren't you the one that wrote char?
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| Re: a comment on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/10:47 AM |
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Yes, the priest and I are singing to the tune of Haydn's symphony that is the second movement. If you noticed too, Tolkien's dots are in the same tune.
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| Re: a comment on For the boyfriend I don't have by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/10:09 AM |
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thanks! And oh, yeah, I will need the luck!
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| Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Dec-02/9:44 AM |
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This is the shitiest, nastiest, most barbaric shit I've ever been unfortunate to lay my eyes on. You either need to get a girlfriend or a boyfriend, you're watching too much porn!!! your brain IS quite fuddled and this is the greatest level of obscene madness I've ever seen. I love it...NOT!
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| Re: Career by BrandonW |
1-Nov-02/8:07 AM |
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That was a typo, it's "I'm". :)
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| Re: Career by BrandonW |
1-Nov-02/8:06 AM |
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Hi welcome to the madhatter's cafe. I the incarnate, nice to meet you. Nice philosophy on life cherie. Would your name be Brandon Walker perchance? if so leave a little banter for me.
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| Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
23-Oct-02/6:04 PM |
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This is the funniest poem I've ever read. You rock! 100%
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| Re: a comment on Char by Amelia |
23-Oct-02/5:59 PM |
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Wow! her poems quite nice. has a tinge of goth to it though and unexpected alliteration. fave line:white rash on black ash
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