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The cheating wife haiku (Haiku) by ~incarnate~
I detest his touch the gardener's butt is nice am I quite unkind?

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10654
Posted: September 4, 2003 12:06 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2003 12:07 PM PDT
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[7] jonnyduk @ 217.137.173.65 | 4-Sep-03/12:18 PM | Reply
~incarnate~ this is odd poem, good tho. (What is haiku?)
[n/a] ~incarnate~ @ 141.225.132.206 > jonnyduk | 23-Sep-03/11:16 AM | Reply
A haiku is based on an old form of Japanese poetry. It is usually a poem written in 3 lines with a rhythm of 5-7-5. I.e. 5 words on the 1st line, 7 on the second and 5 on the last. All the words in the poem are linked and are essential to the poem. There is a better explanation on this site, Kaolin fire has it somewhere under poems. Thanks. :) have a good one.
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