Re: Regrets by Mikius	28-Apr-03/3:29 PM
please change the title to 'Advice from Damocles'.
Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig	28-Apr-03/1:26 PM
how about velevted blood? instead of beautiful?
Re: Safe haven by INTRANSIT	28-Apr-03/8:44 AM
late toilet paper? did you left-hand it?
Re: a comment on Man In A Street by kalikopeli	10-Apr-03/1:28 PM
take up self-censorship.
Re: a comment on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah	3-Mar-03/1:25 PM
Is it giving away trade secrets if you let me in?
Re: Fetish Section by vito0090	3-Mar-03/12:52 PM
Why don't you bring their kids into the store to do a little shopping? Better yet! Why not make your own video, and sell it in the store--then you could love them and hate them all in one felt swoop!
Re: a comment on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah	3-Mar-03/12:40 PM
i see. 2--giving, of course.
Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe	3-Mar-03/12:36 PM
I never laugh. i seethe quietly. except when my trousers are belted as you suggest. i do enjoy that. immensely. sometimes, i even put a rubber dog toy into my tighty-whities, to exponentialize my joy. too bad you like porn chicks. we could've had some fun. but i shall not ride the bang bus, for love or money, and i see you are a fan.
Re: a comment on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah	3-Mar-03/12:15 PM
2 questions: is the face full of piss really necessary? what recommandations for fellatio?
Re: G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah	3-Mar-03/11:44 AM
you are gay.
Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe	3-Mar-03/11:40 AM
hey! watch it with the name calling, low rise!
Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe	3-Mar-03/11:40 AM
but now you can't even rank it! that's just fucked right the fuck up!
Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe	3-Mar-03/11:39 AM
not giving the author/citing the source and posting it under your name=plagiarism. welcome to reality, chump.
Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined	2-Feb-03/3:42 PM
the last line feels jilted of a few beats. other than that--much, much nicer. still sways sing-songily, but is much cleaner.
Re: a comment on As I lay by Katie	2-Feb-03/9:26 AM
CONGRATULATIONS!! you have earned a spot on the list!!!
Re: a comment on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike	1-Feb-03/5:11 PM
well if you prefer mind-numbingly cliched poems, you have come to the right place! may i suggest you start with those named above? glad i could help you out, old chum!
Re: a comment on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike	1-Feb-03/8:06 AM
apparently not.
Re: a comment on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike	31-Jan-03/4:29 PM
Other. Yes. Most perspicaciously said, mon frere. Indeed, our end-of-the-month extravaganzas have become legendary, have they not? Did you hear that Tijuana called, and they want us there gor February? I thought not. I told them, no, we were booked in Sao Paulo, and absolutely could not cancel. And then, they brought up the mirkat incident. Shit. What was I supposed to say? So, plans have changed. Times have changed. The answer, my friend, is blowing...well, this is a family network, so I guess I'll keep that one to myself.
Re: a comment on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin	31-Jan-03/4:24 PM
If Woody had gone straight to the police, this would never have happened.
Re: a comment on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike	31-Jan-03/4:23 PM
I have read them all. his angst, while not 'teen' _per se,_ is of the same calibre. By proxy, the Shoe fits.