Re: a comment on Say Hello by Sawa |
7-Apr-03/12:07 AM |
What I did isn't closeminded at all; there's nothing to close my mind off to. Just because a substantial amount of people associate the sun with all things masculine doesn't mean everyone has to abide by it as if it were an unspoken rule, something I see happening a lot on Poem Ranker. Heaven forbid I call the sun by 'she', something that doesn't have sex organs to identify it as neither male nor female in the first place. I don't think anyone is looking to mimic and copycat anything in their haiku; I certainly am not. If haiku, all of poetry and the rest of the world was static and stagnant, nothing would ever evolve and grow. What kind of a world would that be to live in?
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Re: a comment on Say Hello by Sawa |
6-Apr-03/5:42 PM |
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Re: The Poet by wLeBlancw |
24-Mar-03/9:22 PM |
No wonder this one stood out to me. It's worse than the others, and probably because you DID write it.
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Re: Leave by Luv2write |
23-Mar-03/11:13 PM |
One thing comes to mind: Wrg. It's what you say when your brain goes numb from either confusion or repetition. This one's not confusing at all, so you can finish the math from there.
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Re: Eternal Waiting by darkhelmet10 |
22-Mar-03/11:54 PM |
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Re: Thanks For The Brain Damage by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
22-Mar-03/11:41 PM |
Reminds me of Gackt in his Malice Mizer stage.
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Re: Waiting by Luv2write |
12-Mar-03/3:23 PM |
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Re: Now We are Half by Roisin |
12-Mar-03/3:02 PM |
I enjoyed the wordplay muchly.
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Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus |
12-Mar-03/2:58 PM |
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Re: The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw |
10-Mar-03/6:44 PM |
This is the definition of a strong-worded poem.
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Re: Unholy War by marvelis |
9-Mar-03/12:23 AM |
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Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
18-Feb-03/3:38 PM |
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