poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Sawa and replies

Comments bySawa, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Say Hello by Sawa 7 Apr 2003, 12:07 AM
What I did isn't closeminded at all; there's nothing to close my mind off to. Just because a substantial amount of people associate the sun with all things masculine doesn't mean everyone has to abide by it as if it were an unspoken rule, something I see happening a lot on Poem Ranker. Heaven forbid I call the sun by 'she', something that doesn't have sex organs to identify it as neither male nor female in the first place. I don't think anyone is looking to mimic and copycat anything in their haiku; I certainly am not. If haiku, all of poetry and the rest of the world was static and stagnant, nothing would ever evolve and grow. What kind of a world would that be to live in?
replying on Say Hello by Sawa 6 Apr 2003, 5:42 PM
Says you.
on The Poet by wLeBlancw 24 Mar 2003, 9:22 PM
No wonder this one stood out to me. It's worse than the others, and probably because you DID write it.
on Leave by Luv2write 23 Mar 2003, 11:13 PM
One thing comes to mind: Wrg. It's what you say when your brain goes numb from either confusion or repetition. This one's not confusing at all, so you can finish the math from there.
on Eternal Waiting by darkhelmet10 22 Mar 2003, 11:54 PM
Trite-o-rama.
on Thanks For The Brain Damage by thepinkbunnyofdoom 22 Mar 2003, 11:41 PM
Reminds me of Gackt in his Malice Mizer stage.
on Waiting by Luv2write 12 Mar 2003, 3:23 PM
Trite trite trite.
on Now We are Half by Roisin 12 Mar 2003, 3:02 PM
I enjoyed the wordplay muchly.
on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus 12 Mar 2003, 2:58 PM
Yummy.
on The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw 10 Mar 2003, 6:44 PM
This is the definition of a strong-worded poem.
on Unholy War by marvelis 9 Mar 2003, 12:23 AM
The rhyming's wonky.
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined 18 Feb 2003, 3:38 PM
Pretty damn good. 8.