on A moment, homeward by ecargo
25 Jan 2006, 5:55 PM
It's a good piece. Well written and has some good stuff too. I was taken aback by the 'crows'. I had never pictured 'crows' with snow, as we have hoardes of them here where its pretty hot. The last verse is beautiful. Reminded of the 'solitary reaper' - william wordsworth.
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 5:46 PM
That's a new one. :-)
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 5:44 PM
There are exceptions to every story. Fanatics roam the world. Even then, this is the only place I know and can speak from how I see it. It's not that everyday we hear of religious violence. Moreover I prefer to thank God for small mercies and acknowledge that he is indeed giving me a fair amount of freedom in practicing my religion.
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 10:40 AM
Just claim insanity. The govt should help you from then on. I know cases where thieves and murders claim insanity putting the shrinks and lawyers in a fix. You could try that. but not until you've paid my 100 bucks.
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 10:28 AM
How about a Fraizer from India..... over the phones.... I could get you connected. that would be a 100 bucks brotha.
on A Sheepâs Wish by Dovina
25 Jan 2006, 10:23 AM
This piece is written well, although there's times of break in flow and idea. Maybe with a bit of rearrangement of words you could do better.
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 10:17 AM
15 at that time. And now..... do you need/want another round of consultation. I could try getting you a discount.
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 10:10 AM
Poor victims like you. No wonder he became the best. I should'ave warned you earlier. Sorry!
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 10:06 AM
Zodiac,Here in India we are one billion people, and even a small minority could mean about a million people. So Christians do occupy a large portion, enough to engulf you in your neighbourhood. Both, in Kerala and here in Goa, there's a huge Christian population that I don't see sadhus walking about on my way to work (infact a huge miraculous church is right opposite the institute), or even hear a single muslim call over a loud speaker. Believe it or not, that's not how we see it here, though its painted like that across the seas. India is very tolerant to religions, and you would be surprised to find the world's largest christian retreat centre here in India, in my state - Kerala, and pretty close to where my home is. What we call it here, though, is 'unity in diversity'. So there's no such thing as a non-christian country. Its more like a multi-religious country. Maybe I could take your tip and turn this into a piece of art someday. Thanks.
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 9:51 AM
Did you check out his journals and see if he became rich? Your name could do wonders.
on A Book's Plight by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 9:22 AM
Well, this was more like- done at the spur of the moment. I thought of something and got connected and one to one the piece seemed to flow. Too simple and kiddish - but then, makes me also feel nostalgic about a lot of things gone by, stories that the book of my life would tell.
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 9:17 AM
That was a psychologist. Try having a round with a psychiatrist.
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
25 Jan 2006, 5:31 AM
Ha ha ha..... Shrink he is! He says that its because of me he's landed up here. While I say that I'm his bystander, and that he's the patient who claims to be a doc. All the same, he's the one who signed me onto this site, posting my first poem here. I suppose he plans to study characters like you (through my membership) and then present a paper on his study. Look out for your name in the International journals of Psychiatry. You could be famous. Think about it....your path to fame.......
on Insanity by Lifeboatman
25 Jan 2006, 12:17 AM
Poetry-wise, this might be good (still, I'm not saying it is), but matter-wise, it stinks!
replying on When God is Needed No More by ALChemy
24 Jan 2006, 10:56 PM
You been to Shimla, or to India for that matter?
replying on When God is Needed No More by ALChemy
24 Jan 2006, 10:54 PM
I've been to Shimla last year and shivered terribly even with the umpteen amount of clothing and sitting near the heaters. Didn't even venture out into the knee deep snow, to keep myself alive..... and still returned with a lung infection.... can't think how one can tolerate cold for long. I still love the snow, though.
on I Remembered, Upon Waking by Alizarin_Crimson
24 Jan 2006, 8:02 PM
The poem is well written... though it gave me the idea of Dr. Jeckyl and Mr. Hyde. Well written and a good theme.
replying on When God is Needed No More by ALChemy
24 Jan 2006, 7:57 PM
Alaska? What's up with you in Alaska.... in winter? Huh, I'm feeling chill here with a mild mild winter, and to hear of someone going to Alaska freezes me. Or is is that cold as I imagine it to be?
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
24 Jan 2006, 7:44 PM
Lol. ha ha ha. My previous statement was put as a tease, though not entirely wrong. I live in the hospital campus, at the side of the hospital. My husband is a psychiatrist, and I am surrounded by about 15 others who work next door. We live in the resident doctors' hostel, this place known as 'the Institute of psychiatry and Human Behaviour' and not called a Mental Hospital. See.... I don't know anyone personally, but am trying to know them indirectly.
replying on A Schizophrenic by amanda_dcosta
24 Jan 2006, 10:41 AM
Guess what, zodiac.......
I live in a Mental Hospital surrounded by schizophrenia, bipolar affective disorder, depression, OCD, anxiety, alcoholism, substance used disorders, etc. Trust me.... I know more about schizophrenia than you'll ever know.
;-)
I live in a Mental Hospital surrounded by schizophrenia, bipolar affective disorder, depression, OCD, anxiety, alcoholism, substance used disorders, etc. Trust me.... I know more about schizophrenia than you'll ever know.
;-)