Re: Last Call by thepinkbunnyofdoom	17-Jan-06/6:18 PM
I feel like I can relate to this one, I like it a lot.
Re: Pathetic by Miggy	1-Nov-05/10:37 AM
I like that you've taken something as sad as being rejected by a girl, and rubbed it into their face. That's probably the only thing I like about this, the rest...truely is, pathetic.
Re: I Love You (song) by TLRufener	9-Sep-05/8:05 AM
Quit ripping off of the Backstreet Boy's material...I mean, I don't blame you-they rock, but it's just not right. I wouldn't write anymore songs if I were you, there's already too much of this boring shit already.
Re: a comment on ANALYZE THIS by drnick	7-Sep-05/11:15 PM
It is, just in a language yet to be created.
Re: Fading.+/ by Lindz14	18-Aug-05/9:58 AM
The world is filled with assholes and idiots, don't let them bring you down. I'm glad it seems as though you've come to that conclusion yourself, rock on.
Re: Little Orange Petal Flower by i_am_the_popsicle	18-Aug-05/1:55 AM
It reminds me of the seasonal-depression I expierience. The winter is horrible. The summer is awesome. You're poem is alright.
Re: a comment on What?! by drnick	2-Aug-05/10:29 AM
You know what would be awesome? If you could be technical and completely RUIN EVERYTHING...you're completely right, not choosing is a choice...I meant it to be more like, "why have the choice if you always choose to do nothing and waste away into oblivion?" However, I don't think that rhymes. I put up a new poem for you to hate so enjoy ripping that one apart too.
Re: a comment on The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) by drnick	31-Jul-05/9:04 AM
The whole nature of this poem is to invoke confusion at all times, even when rating. Is it sad that I can't write the worst poem ever even when I try? I think so.
Re: a comment on This Just In... by drnick	31-Jul-05/8:55 AM
Ya, I noticed the lack of a comma after I posted it. I was trying to point out how the news delivers us only what they want us to see, which is usually nothing to be happy about. To me, it seems as though they are trying to make the world seem worse than it really is. Maybe you've never seen the news.
Re: I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Jul-05/10:58 AM
I must say I enjoyed this read. I gave you an 8, because nobody else had.
Re: Brighter by Miggy	29-Jul-05/10:49 AM
Boring, boring, boring. Too specific/personal and waaaaay too played-out a theme. Do you write songs for John Mayer? Take some drugs.
Re: Left by Miggy	29-Jul-05/10:45 AM
Boooooooooooooooooooriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing, if you haven't noticed...the whole love-theme you've got going on here may be popular but it sucks. The lyrics are way too specific. This is the type of song girls in High School sing a long to. Try taking some drugs and write about that.
Re: Death On Arrival by Miggy	29-Jul-05/10:33 AM
Pretty good, but nothing special. I like the chorus.
Re: a comment on The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) by drnick	29-Jul-05/10:09 AM
You're right, the last part does ruin it, especially the last line. Thank you.