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Death On Arrival

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Aug 2003 · 1 comment

Trying to change perspectives Don’t know why feelings are automatic Found pride shattered in pain As nothing will say the same (Chorus) With ending up to find Wrong place, wrong time And yet my lone survival Reminds of your death on arrival ----------------------------------------------------- And no one can bring you back No one would understand No prevail in my agony Not even a helping hand Can’t control a shadow of faith Crying would just worsen the state Knowing I’m stuck again all alone Have all life but nowhere to go (Chorus) No one even bothers to try No one would carry me high No one knows how life is rapid No one thinks what will happen And no one will No one will (Chorus/ Ending)

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[5] drnick 29-Jul-05/10:33 AM Reply
Pretty good, but nothing special. I like the chorus.