Re: For my unborn by Caducus	2-Dec-05/2:53 PM
seems to personal to tarnish with criticism or vote.
Re: a comment on Silent Night by Dovina	2-Dec-05/2:46 PM
Yep, that's my point.
Re: a comment on The Bus by Dovina	2-Dec-05/2:44 PM
I'm sure that's the case with indians too.
Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina	2-Dec-05/5:15 AM
I guess it's partly because around here if you don't back your arguments up with some kind of legitimate documented support than people just fart in your face and accuse you of being full of shit. I honestly think you're much smarter than me in many ways but you'll leave little holes in your arguments were people can trump you by pointing out such pointless things as misspelled words or bad grammar or just a slight miswording. Then ignoring the actual point you were trying to make. I know I'm probably guilty of those very things but usually it's for the sake of humor.
Re: Shamefaced by Doug	2-Dec-05/4:54 AM
Offbeat but also off beat. Some apostrophe problems. Edit and make some cuts. 7
Re: a comment on Silent Night by Dovina	1-Dec-05/6:11 PM
Yours is blasphemy because it's still talking about subjects related to the bible (go ahead and lie and say it doesn't). It's all about the Da Vinci Code which I'm actually not sure is blasphemous. But yours is vulgar (as you said before) so it's surely blasphemous.
Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina	1-Dec-05/5:55 PM
I'm talking about not taking what the preacher says as the Gospel truth.
Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina	1-Dec-05/5:53 PM
So you're saying you and your poems aren't worth the effort. Agreed. I didn't seek out anything. It started with a gift. I thought you'd like it. You stated something I disagreed with and God forbid I gave you my opinion. I saw something about the Mary Gospel on the history channel. I thought, "Dovina might get a kick out of this". It took me all of 30 seconds to find the link. Merry Christmas Scrooge.
Re: a comment on A Modern Woman by Dovina	1-Dec-05/5:30 PM
For the same reason you don't take everything I say for the gospel.
Re: a comment on Silent Night by Dovina	1-Dec-05/5:22 PM
Notice he wasn't offended by mine and I was even a little bit racist in it. I wasn't offended. I just thought it was offensive and the other replies prove me right.
Re: Thunder by dooley	1-Dec-05/11:33 AM
I read the comment so I didn't need to read the poem. I'm so sleepy. Sorry. Here>-10-
Re: a comment on Thunder by dooley	1-Dec-05/11:31 AM
It is one of my goals to some day rhyme above and love in a way that is not cliche at all.
Re: a comment on Chills by BrandonW	1-Dec-05/11:25 AM
-as in 8-ball.
Re: Chills by BrandonW	1-Dec-05/11:23 AM
And you bought it around the corner from a pusher named Jesus. The religion/drug addiction metaphor is a bit cliche but you got some really nice lines in there. Mind if I snort a couple? -8-
Re: a comment on Chills by BrandonW	1-Dec-05/10:58 AM
"I offer another snort" Merry Christmas BrandonW.
Re: Virtue and Sin by dooley	1-Dec-05/10:51 AM
Simple yet very effective. I want to hear more about the racoon and snake. Here's what I've learned. It's as simple, sad and cliche as the old opposites attract adage. We're hypocrites because we complain about it and without realizing it we go and do the same thing. They're really not all that different from us on the inside. Unless you're talking about the vagina. -9-
Re: a comment on Virtue and Sin by dooley	1-Dec-05/10:30 AM
Are you home yet? I seem to sense the Christmas spirit rising in you lately.
Re: a comment on The Bus by Dovina	1-Dec-05/10:26 AM
There was a popular saying we had in art school. "You can't copyright an idea." I give you a -9- Dovina for thinking like an Indian.
Re: a comment on Silent Night by Dovina	1-Dec-05/10:05 AM
Thinking outside the box again.
Re: a comment on Silent Night by Dovina	1-Dec-05/10:01 AM
To an atheist it wouldn't be. It's like if I made fun of Thor.