| Re: a comment on Crazy by that_funny_girl |
20-Aug-05/2:57 PM |
not so much betrayed...as just plain hurt
I never trusted them anyway ....but thanks for taking an interest in my poetry :)
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| Re: The Box by PsydewaysTears |
14-Aug-05/11:42 AM |
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it has a really great rhythm its pleasing to read but it doesnt make much sense
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| Re: Parody Of Sadness by Miggy |
14-Aug-05/11:38 AM |
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I liked some of the verses alot, some of them were really really good, but then others just didnt sound that great, or didn't make much sense
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| Re: a comment on Vietnam by the_poetess |
3-Apr-05/7:25 PM |
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no im not, i read the book shadow of the dragons, and it explains everything i discussed, but im not mad
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| Re: a comment on A Prayer by that_funny_girl |
9-Mar-05/2:36 PM |
who said God does not exist
who said Santa Claus does exist
who was trying to Prove anything
-nessa
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| Re: a comment on Crazy by that_funny_girl |
9-Mar-05/2:35 PM |
thanks - :)
may i ask which parts you did not understand........simply for clarification........i might be able to explain them to you.......
-nessa
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| Re: Severed by shadowaura |
7-Mar-05/4:17 PM |
i give this a 10 because it is good, but i must ask why you included your age - it doesnt really make any difference at all how old you are - and it just seems to give the impressions that want almost a pity vote, for being younger than the rest of us
-nessa
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| Re: nothing could by nentwined |
7-Mar-05/4:13 PM |
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| Re: Nothing And Everything by DaRkMoOnLuVeR |
5-Mar-05/9:43 AM |
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i agree with i_am_the_popsicle - 6 -
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| Re: His Light by DevilBuni |
5-Mar-05/9:35 AM |
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i agree basically with crooked_smile - but like it a little bit less - 4 -
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| Re: You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee |
5-Mar-05/9:33 AM |
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i agree with crooked_smile - 10 -
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| Re: Fastso by Dovina |
5-Mar-05/9:32 AM |
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i like this - makes you think - 9
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