Comments byYikes, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Lies of Society’s Guise by PsydewaysTears 26 Dec 2004, 9:36 PM
haha, I suppose you're completely correct!
on Lies of Society’s Guise by PsydewaysTears 25 Dec 2004, 10:51 PM
Well, Lies of Society's Guies has a better rhythmic quality (this is comming from a musician). A lot catchier still in my eyes.

As a whole, if people would take the time to read this piece, I believe they'd be awed.
on there's no way out by oneglove 23 Dec 2004, 10:08 AM
Quite melancholy. You've done a great job at holding the tone of this piece. Also, the descriptions were phenominal. 10, bravo.
on "oh" by fevriere 23 Dec 2004, 10:01 AM
Ahh so appeasing. Bravo! The true art of a "Haiku-ist"
on The Drop by auscot 21 Dec 2004, 6:22 PM
Hah, I've never been one to pen a good limerick. Very well done. The meter was a tad off in a couple lines but not enough to render distaste. Bravo! An 8.
on Twin Forks by auscot 21 Dec 2004, 6:20 PM
mmm, I enjoyed this! A literary masterpiece; 10, without hesitation.
on Center Of The Universe by Dovina 21 Dec 2004, 11:31 AM
I enjoyed this piece (esspecially the conclusion). 9