| Re: a comment on Lies of Societyâs Guise by PsydewaysTears |
26-Dec-04/9:36 PM |
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haha, I suppose you're completely correct!
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| Re: Lies of Societyâs Guise by PsydewaysTears |
25-Dec-04/10:51 PM |
Well, Lies of Society's Guies has a better rhythmic quality (this is comming from a musician). A lot catchier still in my eyes.
As a whole, if people would take the time to read this piece, I believe they'd be awed.
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| Re: there's no way out by oneglove |
23-Dec-04/10:08 AM |
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Quite melancholy. You've done a great job at holding the tone of this piece. Also, the descriptions were phenominal. 10, bravo.
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| Re: "oh" by fevriere |
23-Dec-04/10:01 AM |
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Ahh so appeasing. Bravo! The true art of a "Haiku-ist"
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| Re: The Drop by auscot |
21-Dec-04/6:22 PM |
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Hah, I've never been one to pen a good limerick. Very well done. The meter was a tad off in a couple lines but not enough to render distaste. Bravo! An 8.
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| Re: Twin Forks by auscot |
21-Dec-04/6:20 PM |
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mmm, I enjoyed this! A literary masterpiece; 10, without hesitation.
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| Re: Center Of The Universe by Dovina |
21-Dec-04/11:31 AM |
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I enjoyed this piece (esspecially the conclusion). 9
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