on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2004, 9:50 PM
As a whole, your way with originality is unbelievable. The letter idea was a wonderful expression and did carry a mirrorish type feel.
on Center Of The Universe by Dovina
21 Dec 2004, 11:31 AM
I enjoyed this piece (esspecially the conclusion). 9
on Twin Forks by auscot
21 Dec 2004, 6:20 PM
mmm, I enjoyed this! A literary masterpiece; 10, without hesitation.
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2004, 9:56 AM
mmm... this was beautiful! I knew that the brilliant scoundral had to be here somewhere and while scrolling down the names I say, "Hey! There's ed!". The mood was sustained nicely in this and the pictures... reminded me of something in a song.
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2004, 9:57 AM
A poem I've read elsewhere many times and, if I may, a litterary masterpiece. Had to vote on this one, it's a classic.
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2004, 9:59 AM
Ahh the element. You know, I'd yet to read the third to your series. I don't think I could weigh any of them on any sort of scale. Once more, so much poetic element. Well done!
on there's no way out by oneglove
23 Dec 2004, 10:08 AM
Quite melancholy. You've done a great job at holding the tone of this piece. Also, the descriptions were phenominal. 10, bravo.
on Lies of Society’s Guise by PsydewaysTears
25 Dec 2004, 10:51 PM
Well, Lies of Society's Guies has a better rhythmic quality (this is comming from a musician). A lot catchier still in my eyes.
As a whole, if people would take the time to read this piece, I believe they'd be awed.
As a whole, if people would take the time to read this piece, I believe they'd be awed.