| Re: Decline and Fall by auscot |
20-Dec-04/5:52 PM |
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Thanks Dovina with the mystic name, I admire your lack of cynicism, but regret that Decline and Fall failed to register as a metaphor for the corrupt and corruption all around us. For Zoo Keepers read politicians.
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| Re: Math Poem by Dovina |
20-Dec-04/6:09 PM |
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Too deep and numerical for me. As a sculptor my poems are rendered in stone with a mallet and chisel, it's the only way they stay immortal and the exercise keeps me fit and so patient.
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| Re: Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams |
20-Dec-04/6:21 PM |
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I will never take to free verse, must be my age, give me a good old fashioned rhyming poem any day. Yet, never too late, must try. One thing I would like to see, a 'tumulous' ocean with an 'o'.
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| Re: If I knew by Rabbit |
20-Dec-04/6:28 PM |
This is a reminder to all of us that love is a four letter word which must be used frequently, without qualification. It is the poem we all love to hear. This poem reached me and I'm old and cynical. Well done.
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| Re: This God of mine by Bobjim |
20-Dec-04/6:34 PM |
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I'm not into borrowing Gods. I worship the great outdoors and this wonderful world, which evolved over time for us to live in and enjoy.
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| Re: Decline and Fall by auscot |
20-Dec-04/6:50 PM |
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Dovina, I was unaware I had deleted comments on Decline and Fall, must have been the devil in me. Re The Drop I prefer my ending its the only time I get a commended.
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| Re: Joanna by DR Limerick |
22-Dec-04/2:08 AM |
There was a young girl called Joanna
with a face shaped like a banana.
Her boyfriend said so,
I want you to know,
she's bent and comes from Havana.
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| Re: Andrew part II by Spindle |
22-Dec-04/2:22 AM |
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Move on, you lost your virginity. The world is full of predators who take what they want or are offered it on a plate. It taught you a lesson, it's called the getting of wisdom. Let your next poem be a happy one,it lies within you, let it free.
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| Re: Math Poem 2 by Dovina |
28-Dec-04/8:52 PM |
This poem is disingenuous, is it some sort of avant garde
form of writing to scare off readers and give poetry a bad name? Please, let's make poetry readable and enjoyable.
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| Re: Storms by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
29-Dec-04/9:45 PM |
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You are a poet and I like your style, it says something and says it well.
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30-Dec-04/10:00 PM |
I find this too contrived and boringly repetitive, there is more 'ore' in this than the whole of Western Australia.
Perhaps it's me and I don't understand the structure, please enlighten me, I am willing to learn
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