Re: Remember by psychedelic	8-Aug-04/9:33 AM
very chocolate boxy
Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000	30-Jul-04/4:55 PM
Hmmm interesting thoughts, bet I know where you were when you thought of this one.................
Re: California triolets by zodiac	30-Jul-04/4:54 PM
very nicely done
Re: One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer	14-Jul-04/2:12 PM
Liked this one................
Re: Eros, and Psycho by horus8	14-Jul-04/2:10 PM
Very enjoyable
Re: a comment on Tale of a mermaid by sanity	5-Jul-04/2:02 PM
it is the tale of a mermaid who once her path was chosen she would never be able to return to her life as a mermaid, so yes, it was impassable
Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	5-Jul-04/7:20 AM
A very interesting piece, a style I have not seen before, are we saying what we would like for dinner? hehehehe......... very funny.............
Re: a comment on Your sad goodbye by sanity	4-Jul-04/8:48 AM
there is a name for it, I created it myself and named it seicinque, thi8s is a multiple seicinque, the basis is line 1 6 syllables lines2,3,4. 5 syllables you can have one stanza or multiples of and the rhyming scheme is aBCb dBCb eBCb and so on, try it, it's quite challenging and you can use any subjest matter with it........
Re: The Western World by mrpresident	4-Jul-04/1:06 AM
I really like this, it tells of someone who is stuck maybe in a dead end job and just ants to be free........ Wobderful............