Re: The Ballade of Hollis Browne by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	22-Aug-04/12:58 AM
Very Langston Hughes-ish with the repeating of the first line. Extremely lewd. Even for you... Cheers
Re: a comment on An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator by tolstoyleo	2-Jul-04/6:48 AM
Totally unfitting. That is why there will be a trilogy of them dedicated to his mastery. Unmatching and unfitting the Aids in a (x) triology as well.
Re: a comment on When the night completes by donmiguel1960	1-Jul-04/10:37 AM
Thank you for the correction. Often I read far too deep into these things. cheers
Re: a comment on An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator by tolstoyleo	1-Jul-04/10:33 AM
You would have to definately read the poetry written by "=-dark_angel_= on this site. He has 3 poems in the "worst" section if you didn't know, and most of his poetry is SUPER FUNNY! well... I spent probably 3 hours reading his stuff and was very amazed at the creativity and time spent. Basically. The poem is about taking a shit.
Re: a comment on What is a midget? by tolstoyleo	1-Jul-04/10:29 AM
True. But did you read my ode to you?!? I think you would find the style a little more ... ummm... what's the word I'm looking for... adultish?
Re: The Curlew's Cry (Yr alwad y Gylfinir) by Blurgerocity	1-Jul-04/2:50 AM
The category is free verse but I found myself going: ababcc ababcc while readin it. But... I thought it was alright. I gave it an 8
Re: When the night completes by donmiguel1960	1-Jul-04/2:15 AM
I thought this was going to end in "What am I?" To which I was going to reply: A lizard in the desert But that didn't happen
Re: The Missing Peace by nothingtoanyone	1-Jul-04/2:11 AM
At first I thought this was one of those: "What am I?" poems... and I hate those.
Re: Poetry. by jonnyduk	1-Jul-04/2:05 AM
"His hobbies a waste of time." multiple hobbies? -0-
Re: The Power Of Standing Still (Ghazellanelle) by Bachus	1-Jul-04/2:02 AM
In its form, the ghazal is a short poem rarely of more than a dozen couplets in the same metre. It always opens with a rhyming couplet called matla. The rhyme of the opening couplet is repeated at the end of second line in each succeeding verse, so that the rhyming pattern may be represented as AA, BA, CA, DA, and so on. In addition to the restriction of rhyme, the ghazal also observes the convention of radif. Radif demands that a portion of the first line -- comprising not more than two or three words -- immediately preceding the rhyme-word at the end, should rhyme with its counterpart in the second line of the opening couplet, and afterwards alternately throughout the poem. The opening couplet of the ghazal is always a representative couplet: it sets the mood and tone of the poem and prepares us for its proper appreciation. The last couplet of the ghazal called makta often includes the pen-name of the poet, and is more personal than general in its tone and intent. Here the poet may express his own state of mind, or describe his religious faith, or pray for his beloved, or indulge in poetic self-praise. The different couplets of the ghazal are not bound by the unity and consistency of thought. Each couplet is a self-sufficient unit, detachable and quotable, generally containing the complete expression of an idea.
Re: The Power Of Standing Still (Ghazellanelle) by Bachus	1-Jul-04/1:59 AM
How do you swim standing still? -8-
Re: Blobby song$ by MR Blobby	1-Jul-04/1:57 AM
I just don't get it. Would you please explain it to me?
Re: Stuck in VI by jonnyduk	1-Jul-04/1:54 AM
I gave it a 6. I thought there should be one more "Why?"
Re: a comment on a Waste of Space by thepinkbunnyofdoom	30-Jun-04/10:13 PM
You are a dumb mother fuck. My word was: pop-tarded. The word you speak of is: pop-tart. Clearly 2 sepearte words. Mine being a concatenated word based on two words, yours being the fact that you are pop-tarded. good lick to you and your "work"
Re: A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom	30-Jun-04/5:06 AM
well... weren't you wrong!!!
Re: Thong Thoo by fatmansinging	30-Jun-04/4:40 AM
You sound like my friend who has a very bad lisp... and speaking of... why does the word lisp end in "sp?" I gave it a 3
Re: a Waste of Space by thepinkbunnyofdoom	30-Jun-04/4:30 AM
I made a word: pop-tarded. It's my nice way of saying retarded. I really liked this poem. I liked it so much, I printed it out and used it in place of my toilet paper. -0-