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Stuck in VI (Limerick) by jonnyduk I'm failing to feel any kicks,
From my wonderous poetical mix,
And God, Why? Why? why?
I beg and I cry,
For a better rating than a six!
Up the ladder:
WHY DAD?WHY?
Down the ladder:
Life As a Boat
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Posted: June 30, 2004 4:13 PM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2004 4:13 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7854347 Overall Rank: 11321 Comments:
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tolstoyleo @ 172.197.181.253
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1-Jul-04/1:54 AM
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I gave it a 6. I thought there should be one more "Why?"
here.
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