Re: a comment on Absolution by Drunk Russian Poet	25-Jun-04/12:49 PM
You may well be right about that. I'm sorry to hear that, but it sounds like you're doing a good job carrying on.
Re: Pathetic by Miggy	24-Jun-04/8:59 PM
yep, sure is.
Re: a comment on That Girl Before by Miggy	24-Jun-04/8:57 PM
second that.
Re: PATIENCE by jroday	24-Jun-04/8:56 PM
LOL
Re: a comment on Getting the Cool Kids To Like Me by the codeine kid	24-Jun-04/8:49 PM
ummmm, hey...you need to....nevermind.
Re: a comment on Absolution by Drunk Russian Poet	24-Jun-04/8:45 PM
How's this? I think it still has the stigma but the young ones are just too..i don't know...naive? to really understand. On the other hand, if dad's a complete ass, then maybe you just don't care.
Re: a comment on Center Of The Universe by Dovina	24-Jun-04/8:39 PM
I loves it.
Re: Tulips for Penelope by zenhaircut	24-Jun-04/8:04 PM
You had me at vodka.
Re: Flower of Lebanon by donmiguel1960	24-Jun-04/8:03 PM
Some of the rhymes are good and some seem very forced (i.e.- sun/shun). Other than that, not bad.
Re: a comment on The Hot Job by peaceseeker	24-Jun-04/7:57 PM
Because we're looking for a poetic life, when it doesn't exist.
Re: Walk with you by moonlightdance	24-Jun-04/7:55 PM
Lose the rhymes and this isn't bad.
Re: Someday by moonlightdance	24-Jun-04/7:53 PM
This isn't that great as a poem, but for some reason I like it. Would be better, methinks, as a lyric.