| Re: a comment on Center Of The Universe by Dovina |
21-Jun-04/2:24 PM |
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As a fellow human, I can assume that it applies to all races. As a fellow mamal, I see it in dogs. Insects might be a stretch, but I don't think so.
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| Re: Windfall by wilco |
21-Jun-04/8:57 AM |
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The poem says something about romanse and sex and regret that strikes home. I'd never get that from the above comments, but like it anyway.
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| Re: Where Else to Start But the End by cleverdevice |
21-Jun-04/5:08 AM |
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Sadly true, some good insight. I'd call it free verse and look for ways to shorten it and cull the cliche, "Hell would freeze over."
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| Re: an ode to love by francis nor capule |
21-Jun-04/5:01 AM |
One of the best definitions of love I've seen. I really like, "for if logic or reason won over love, would it be the same?" Bravo!
"you thought him" -> you taught him
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| Re: a comment on Center Of The Universe by Dovina |
21-Jun-04/4:49 AM |
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Cruel and biting - the spice of life. And yes on the comma. Thanks.
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| Re: Cool In The Army by wilco |
20-Jun-04/8:29 PM |
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| Re: Frozen Soul by TLRufener |
20-Jun-04/8:16 PM |
I don't like about suicide, but if it helps you to cope, then okay. Some redundancies could be omitted like, "The world rushed by me / At an intense pace," as one example. "You quickly broke my neck" was a surprise.
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| Re: Time Imperfect by MacFrantic |
20-Jun-04/8:09 PM |
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