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an ode to love (Free verse) by francis nor capule
look , o love, at what you did to this fool
you taught him how to care for someone, and took the person away
for all this fool ever wanted was someone to love, someone to care for
but you truly are fickle, the other person is in love with someone else
is this how you work? you spread your bliss to everyone but the right
people?
if that was the case perhaps everything between us was a dream... a
tragedy...
for one was left, in sorrow, writhing...
and the other one, in hopes, dreaming...
but after all this, i promise you... i will conquer you , as i have
conquered all...
i have never been vanquished, never lost... perhaps now, i would think
of things in a different perspective.
yes i may be justifying what happened... but know this... i will never
turn away from you, love... but be stronger, when you come around. i
will master you, and then everything would not be right. for if logic or
reason won over love, would it be the same?
perhaps in time the answer would be known... for now i cherish my peace..
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Posted: June 21, 2004 4:11 AM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2004 5:44 AM PDT
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"you thought him" -> you taught him