Re: Pop Quiz by steven adams	8-Oct-04/10:14 AM
As Samantha, I ignore them. As Steven, I'd have to act macho with a joke.
Re: a comment on DUKE BLOBBY;;;;; by MR Blobby	8-Oct-04/3:54 AM
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Re: DUKE BLOBBY;;;;; by MR Blobby	7-Oct-04/9:09 AM
There was a certain king who had ten thousand men He marched them up the hill one day and marched them down again. And when you're up, you're up And when you're down, you're down and when you're only half way up, you're neither up n0or down.
Re: The Mortician: Scourge of the pen. by SupremeDreamer	7-Oct-04/8:58 AM
Some good thoughts here, especially that a mortician is there "to facilitate the apathetic-but-proper disposal of the soul."
Re: a comment on One True Instant by Dovina	7-Oct-04/5:54 AM
Is this a malady among husbands? I thought I was talking about just one. Good to hear you were got anyway.
Re: a comment on Black Woman by jroday	7-Oct-04/5:50 AM
Appology accepted.
Re: a comment on One True Instant by Dovina	7-Oct-04/5:48 AM
Surely you are not that husband. Thanks.
Re: a comment on Death's Invitation by eliastemplar	6-Oct-04/10:31 AM
May he see your coin as a shield reflecting any arrow he might aim, and Afganistan as a place that's already taken too much. If I were in charge, they would send middle-aged women like me to war and spare the young folks.
Re: a comment on Lady Bradbury’s Excursion by Dovina	6-Oct-04/10:09 AM
Not too amusing, please.
Re: a comment on One True Instant by Dovina	6-Oct-04/10:08 AM
Not confusion, different processing.
Re: Death's Invitation by eliastemplar	6-Oct-04/10:04 AM
I have a letter that might as well be around my neck reminding of a narrow escape, and in a bargain with the grim reaper, there's the stones of a crumbled foundation accross a wooded path. Thanks for the reminder.
Re: a comment on One True Instant by Dovina	6-Oct-04/9:59 AM
A great thing about poetry is that what I think when writing is not necessarily the thought arising in a reader. Thank you.
Re: Confusion by berdabear	6-Oct-04/8:02 AM
A mish-mash of uncontrolled thoughts.
Re: Better All The Time by wilco	6-Oct-04/7:49 AM
At least you're off the marriage binge.
Re: Big fanny by keatsImnot	4-Oct-04/5:37 AM
Some good thoughts here, some bad grammar. I don't like the title. Either that or I did not get the connection.
Re: All At Last by nocturnalism	4-Oct-04/5:33 AM
The country's not really all that bad. Some crap, yes. But some good stuff too.
Re: What is a poet by INTRANSIT	4-Oct-04/5:30 AM
How do porcupines make love, particularly the hair-trigger kind? I ask because of this poisonous twitch. It's getting in the way.
Re: hauntingly sad beauty of death by Prince of Void	3-Oct-04/11:36 AM
Some good thoughts here, but the title gives you away. I'd rather see a title that only hints. And some grammar glytches make it choppy.
Re: A Portrait of Antonio Machado (Edit) by Sasha	3-Oct-04/11:13 AM
Your poetry comes from some "tranquil spring" and you are truly "good"???? I was about to criticize, but then I looked at my own reasons for this futility and find find them just as ridiculous.
Re: Crushing Gingersnaps (beat) by INTRANSIT	3-Oct-04/11:04 AM
You're getting all choppy on us, truckdriver, swerving all over the beaten path like a meverick mermaid's man in a mania. Is this a kind of second childhood? Not bad in a punk sort of way.