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All At Last (Free verse) by nocturnalism
a once great nation fell unleashed an unquenchable hell never again shall her proud banner fly for power and pleasure did people lust her great strength turned ash and rust doomed for enternity in shame to lie all liberty erased the chanins of slavery locked in place control the mind from birth renounce all contrary rebels thought with freemans blood is imprisonment bought till freedom lost on all the earth

Down the ladder: Blood and roses.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7054
Posted: September 30, 2004 10:08 PM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2004 10:08 PM PDT
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[6] Dovina @ 204.250.12.246 | 4-Oct-04/5:33 AM | Reply
The country's not really all that bad. Some crap, yes. But some good stuff too.
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