Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina	1-Mar-05/11:48 AM
That’s what we call in the trade a cliché, old hat, trite, obvious when it was first said, boring then, boring now. Hey mofo, what about the poem?
Re: In My Arms by jroday	1-Mar-05/9:03 AM
Drop the first line, since it's the same as the title, and change "mine" to "mind" in Line 3. Also, some of the punctuation is not needed. Otherwise pretty good.
Re: For Junior by PodPoet	1-Mar-05/7:46 AM
Beware!
Re: a comment on Hunger by Dovina	1-Mar-05/7:37 AM
Yes, I am insane.
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	1-Mar-05/7:34 AM
You've said all that unsupported blather before, but it's always good to hear it again.
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	28-Feb-05/9:06 PM
As told to me by a man in a bar who was in the WTC on that day and followed his boss down the stairs with ten other employees. How could it be otherwise?
Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina	28-Feb-05/2:42 PM
Thank you so much for your confidence in my work evidenced by only now noticing a cracking (of course, no pun intended), but I have not cracked, unless trying new ways of expression is a kind of insanity.
Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina	28-Feb-05/2:42 PM
He who has eyes to see, let him see.
Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina	28-Feb-05/2:33 PM
LISP, the language of AutoCad and other graphic applications.
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	28-Feb-05/2:32 PM
lol, but no.
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	28-Feb-05/2:31 PM
I made the boss man male because he is a man. I believe I could have written it with a woman boss, but that's not the way it was. Could you have written this story with either gender as protagonist or would you just let it pass if the boss were a woman?
Re: a comment on Hunger by Dovina	28-Feb-05/2:22 PM
You make it much more complecated than it is. Both of your suggestions are much too difficult.
Re: a comment on Hunger by Dovina	28-Feb-05/4:41 AM
Cerebral slop. So many words for so little content. Please strive for brevity.
Re: Ode by James Rykelangeli	27-Feb-05/6:31 AM
Very funny and nicely done. It makes me laugh at myself. Welcome to Poemranker.
Re: How Do I Become a Poet? (with John B. Benitez) by Vince Dolamando	27-Feb-05/6:25 AM
Poetry is something you read after you have written it and eliminated the obvious mistakes. It's a fine point I know, but try to master it.
Re: Homecoming Parade by wilco	27-Feb-05/6:05 AM
Thought provoking. I can hear it with an acoustic guitar from a coffee house stool. Not bad.
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	27-Feb-05/5:55 AM
A blatant and predictably sexist response.
Re: As The Days Turn to Months by DevilBuni	26-Feb-05/5:24 PM
The first 2 verses say it all and pretty well. Consider dropping the last.
Re: a comment on Rough Translation (Prose) by William Alfaro	26-Feb-05/5:18 PM
That link - it's a good read.
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	26-Feb-05/7:05 AM
I'm gonna repost it, and make it clearer.