Re: The Precious Thing by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	20-Aug-02/10:23 PM
OH yeah! That was the best thing ive ever seen! Bravo BRavo! BRAVO! give it a fucking standing ovation.. u say my poem sucks at least it makes sense all of urs are pointless.. and have no meaning.. u need to stop pretending.. at least i dont go around this site swingin my balls like im the best..
Re: Bizarre Practices by longships	20-Aug-02/10:59 PM
I sorta agree with them but i dont think CHILDREN would be using it.. because of the fact ur talkin all nasty like maybe ur the one with the obsession here.. ur a big weirdo.. other than that its ok i guess but like totally wrong!
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Aug-02/11:01 PM
Ok.. i think u have some serious issues and need to think about seeing a physcologist.. u sound like one of those fucking moms who like microwaves their babies or something.. thats sick and twisted..
Re: How Dare You Knock? by unknown	20-Aug-02/11:02 PM
that was sorta confuzzlin but it was ok, u werent nasty like some people, u werent like physco.. it was kewl.. good job.. keep tryin! :-P
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	20-Aug-02/11:11 PM
i agree.. it creates a good picture of what its about but the words just dont fit together right or something.. other than that its kewl.. oh and ( maybe u should do some research about people b4 u go chasin them around and accusing them of shiznit..)
Re: Birth by nentwined	20-Aug-02/11:14 PM
That was a pretty good haiku.. uve got some talent.. keep up the good work! :-P
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Aug-02/11:18 PM
I dunno zinnia after takin a second look ur right only a couple parts sound like that.. but it is hard to understand what the writer is getting at... hmmmph... im confuzzled...
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	20-Aug-02/11:24 PM
I have the right to talk however i wanna fucking talk... no i dont go to school.. its summer dumbass.. and im no critic.. if i like something i tell the truth.. u just need to get a life... cuz u keep goin round readin what Im writing and then talkin bout how young i am? is that all u got on me? that i wrote a fuckin crappy ass wanna be patriotic poem and like im young? ok there buddy u got issues.. and my mother could give 2 shits less.. she is right fucking next to me assface.. she buys me cigs.. she gives me some a fucking joint if i clean my room or find the fuckin remote and she could care less what the fuck i do.. so u need to think of something else to "criticize" me with.. cuz i think ur well has dryed up.. all u are is a fucking cum bubble on a faggots ass... hee*hee.. have a nice nite.. byez.. and oh by the way ur real "kewl" arent u?
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	20-Aug-02/11:28 PM
OH by the way.. i quite enjoy this little fighting through the comments thing.. it gives me something better to do that chat with my buds on aim.. welp.. come on throw some lame ass comment at me so i can return it with another lame ass one.. :-D
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	20-Aug-02/11:38 PM
I bet u dont even have a daughter and ive written more poems than just that gay ass fuckin patriotic one.. will u get over it? if u really wanna see what the deal is with me.. go to www.teenopendiary.com to the diary of *~*Jarah*~* and read all about it... that should tell ya all u need to know.. then u can fire some good ones at me cuz im getting sick of all the gay ass patriotic shit..
Re: Secret, Admirer by <~>	20-Aug-02/11:47 PM
I <3 it zzinnia it rawx! U have got a knack for this shiznit.. keep up wit it..
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	20-Aug-02/11:49 PM
Glad im helpin ya out poet.. n e wayz.. i told ya once.. if u would like click the recent button.. i submitted a couple of the poems in my diary.. i have to admit they suck ass but hey.. im a kid who gives a shit what i think.. and please stop with this preppy teenybopper shit.. im an ugly fat ass soo please dont act like im a fuckin prep.. thanks.. lookin forward to the next one.!..
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	20-Aug-02/11:52 PM
this is kewl its like a frucked up chat room or something.. its keepin me awake and im just waitin for a friend to get online.. oh well.. *sighs* here we go!
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	20-Aug-02/11:59 PM
Do u like being a journalist.. or does it suck.. i mean like u musta liked it cuz u chose to persue that profession but.. actually like how is it?.. do u get paid well? lol.. j/w
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	21-Aug-02/12:07 AM
Lmao.. man poet and zzinnia.. this poem has like a lot of comments cuz like me and poet were fightin through em and u and him or her.. are like talkin through em.. oh thats gr8.. i wish i could go to sleep but i like have been like havin this insomniac thing goin on for me for like the past couple weeks.. any suggestions?
Re: Shelter by poetandknowit	21-Aug-02/12:15 AM
ok.. g'nite poet.. and gl with ur article.. an g'nite zzinnia.. i dont know either of u but.. im bored so i dont care.. lol.. im going to get off the computer and go lie in my bed staring at the ceiling because i cant sleep.. g'nite!
Re: You strike me by Butterflies	21-Aug-02/12:33 AM
I dont care what other people think but i think ur poem was kewl, from the heart.. not many people care about that stuff.. so we gotta get out there and tell them how we dont care about their gay verses.. lol ':-)
Re: The Ship by Sh|t?	26-Feb-03/11:25 PM
Kewl poem, gave a good mental pic. keep writin..