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The Ship (Free verse) by Sh|t?
He and she on the Ship
Embarked on this journey
Not knowing where this may lead
You gotta admit, it's quite silly
The Ship sailed smooth with speed
Happy was he and she
With calm waters and great weather
Everyday was filled with glee
But orange leaves start to fall
as the wind blows a breeze
Lightning strikes and thunder roars
Oh, make the waves quit rocking, please
Rain hit them like hail
Beating them incessantly
Strong wind assisted the rain
But they sailed on relentlessly
They pushed themselves, holding on
to the Ship close to their hearts
Sailing away, feeling gay
Going with their guts.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10102
Posted: February 26, 2003 11:17 PM PST; Last modified: February 26, 2003 11:17 PM PST
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