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Home (Free verse) by morffrom
Often when I think of that place
I dream of her and the stream
the way the water ran off the heather
her ruby lips, the green air that
we breathed together
but that was long ago
and now the boy is a man
and he is lost in a world
of strangers and wishes he was home
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
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Posted: March 5, 2003 12:18 AM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 12:18 AM PST
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there are more. these pop up in my mind immediately.
trust your gut, mysterious palindrome.