| Re: a comment on Voice of the World by Dovina |
Dovina 208.127.216.60 |
18-Jan-08/7:32 AM |
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It took some time, but you're catching on. Just a couple of baby steps to go. Donate to this.
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| Re: a comment on Voice of the World by Dovina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 87.84.68.242 |
18-Jan-08/1:56 AM |
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Oh I get it. They want to kill me because I don't believe in their stupid, horrid religion, so to stop that *I* have to pay *them* money? Yeah that makes sense-- reward the insolent and punish the victims.
Here's a better idea: they all stop believing in -=MUSLIM=- of their own accord, apologize for all the trouble they've caused, and pay reparations until they've learnt their lesson. I guarantee they'll be better off in the long run.
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| Re: a comment on Voice of the World by Dovina |
Dovina 208.127.216.239 |
17-Jan-08/4:36 PM |
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Well check again, the darn thing keeps growing.
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| Re: a comment on Running Local by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 208.127.216.239 |
17-Jan-08/4:31 PM |
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| Re: Life is a moment by Prince of Void |
Dovina 208.127.216.239 |
17-Jan-08/4:30 PM |
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ok, but get the grammar right, it irks me.
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| Re: The dumping world by Prince of Void |
Dovina 208.127.216.239 |
17-Jan-08/4:29 PM |
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| Re: You're passionate by EAger to Offend |
Dovina 208.127.216.239 |
17-Jan-08/4:24 PM |
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"Deep fascinations, shallow understanding" That ought to be everyone's goal
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| Re: a comment on Voice of the World by Dovina |
Dovina 208.127.216.239 |
17-Jan-08/4:21 PM |
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Happy to have pleased you
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| Re: Tyrant's Parade by MacFrantic |
ThePariahDog 209.190.158.2 |
17-Jan-08/2:57 PM |
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| Re: Voice of the World by Dovina |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
17-Jan-08/7:47 AM |
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I closed my eyes, until they hurt,
And prayed it would go away,
But when, again, I opened my eyes,
This poem still looked really gay.
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| Re: a comment on Voice of the World by Dovina |
Dovina 76.94.95.251 |
16-Jan-08/12:48 PM |
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Fill not, then, the mouth of famine, if you fear this, but fill the brains of young ones, not yet bent on gihad, not fully convinced, as their madrasahs wish them to be, that unlike minds should die. Donate to this.
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| Re: a comment on Shiver by Skamper |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.65.198.159 |
16-Jan-08/12:32 PM |
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| Re: Unemployed by OneFingerAnswer |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.73.172.29 |
15-Jan-08/4:46 PM |
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Couldn't He have just gone round to someone's house and cleaned up?
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| Re: a comment on Day Dream by Jessina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.73.172.29 |
15-Jan-08/4:11 PM |
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Complimenting your own poemes is an extremely arrogant thing to do.
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| Re: Spectrum Of Passion by Mickey Pig Knuckles |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.73.172.29 |
15-Jan-08/4:07 PM |
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Thank you so much for sharing your gift of literature. This is one of the excellentest poemes I have read today and it doesn't matter that it doesn't rhyme because not all poemes have to rhyme you idiot.
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| Re: Voice of the World by Dovina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.73.172.29 |
15-Jan-08/4:00 PM |
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I think Kipling said it best:
Take up the White Man's burdenâ
The savage wars of peaceâ
Fill full the mouth of Famine,
And bid the sickness cease;
And when your goal is nearest
(The end for others sought)
Watch sloth and heathen folly
Bring all your hope to nought.
That is why I shan't be donating.
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| Re: a comment on Voice of the World by Dovina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.73.172.29 |
15-Jan-08/3:54 PM |
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[X] Pointedly unanswered questions
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| Re: Voice of the World by Dovina |
some deleted user 63.127.193.79 |
13-Jan-08/7:56 PM |
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I've read this over and over--it's still good but I feel like somthing is missing. Maybe another stanza or make stanza two the last one?
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| Re: a comment on Voice of the World by Dovina |
Dovina 208.127.216.96 |
11-Jan-08/8:13 AM |
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You are right. With my rancher up, poetry slides in second.
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| Re: a comment on Voice of the World by Dovina |
Dovina 208.127.216.96 |
11-Jan-08/7:49 AM |
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Within the voiceless world, I hear a metaphor of the wasteland. Itâs not the reality of my life. I entertain myself by trying to be more sympathetic. You are onto something here. We give a dollar, feel better, go on our way. You can do more Voidless Prince. Join me at http://www.hopedevelopment.org/ Send an email to Rashad Javed. Tell him what you told me and ask how you can help. You might be surprised.
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