Re: Here are the wipes by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:37 PM
This is a totally fabbo poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you; you would be much appreciated there.....
Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:36 PM
This is a hideous poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Wash away my life by winniss	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:35 PM
This is a pathetic poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Bumper Crop by Dovina	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:34 PM
This is a crappy yet lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: +Painful+ by Holy Sinner	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:34 PM
This is a dreary poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Ted and Fred by worldsofwar	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:33 PM
This is a dreadful poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Trust by hobojo	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:33 PM
This is a passable poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Your not my boyfriend Chuck by alvinb	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:32 PM
This is a fucking obscene poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Milwaukee Haiku by jessicazee	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:31 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Milwaukee Haiku by jessicazee	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:31 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Disengage by PoetryIsDead	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:31 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Absurd Robot by Nepanthe	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:30 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: a comment on Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe	Nepanthe 99.239.241.239	25-Feb-08/6:51 AM
Personally I think the largest problem with this is that the mentality comes across as Christian rather than Sufi, and she's a bad Christian at that. Gives a bad taste in the mouth as far as passive fatalism goes.
Re: Trust by hobojo	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.65.158.244	22-Feb-08/7:55 PM
This is exemplary of your talent.
Re: a comment on Trust by hobojo	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.65.158.244	22-Feb-08/7:52 PM
Wait, now I get it. Conflicting tense. I feel shame.
Re: a comment on Trust by hobojo	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.65.158.244	22-Feb-08/7:49 PM
What's wrong with "drown"? I drown You drown He/She/It drowns We drown You drown They drown Conjugate the mutherfucking verb you chump.
Re: plea bargain by malpaso	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.65.158.244	22-Feb-08/7:41 PM
Quality. I love the line breaks before and after "see nothing deep". How on Earth did you come up with that? Pure instinct I guess...
Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.65.158.244	22-Feb-08/7:37 PM
Reads like the ramblings of a toothless simpleton. Are you semi-literate, or what? Self-referential poemes are exceedingly bow'ls. But this is not. This is bum-crushingly stupid. For that you should be proud.
Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe	Crakyamuni 131.252.241.216	19-Feb-08/5:39 PM
It feels like a congregational in the church of hippie love, yes!
Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe	malpaso 70.233.161.116	18-Feb-08/6:40 PM
absolutely beautiful! may fallen snow encase me.