Re: a comment on when i make sculpture by ay deee	zodiac 217.144.7.195	27-Oct-05/12:37 PM
Stalactites hang down.
Re: a comment on when i make sculpture by ay deee	zodiac 217.144.7.195	27-Oct-05/12:36 PM
No, the aboveposted message means you misused the word "blatant" in your poem. Now in your comment, too. Twice. The symbols aren't all bad.
Re: Remember me she said by Caducus	vulcan 80.242.8.17	27-Oct-05/9:36 AM
beautiful one
Re: a comment on The cold shoulder by <~>	<~> 167.206.181.179	27-Oct-05/8:50 AM
clusterfuck. heh. thanks for the laugh.
Re: The cold shoulder by <~>	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	27-Oct-05/8:40 AM
Gives new meaning to the term "Cluster fuck". First the moon now the stars is there a term for this type of sexual preference? Cosmosexual? Celestialphile? Astro-erotica? Nice juicy stuff you're writing.
Re: Acoustics by oneglove	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	27-Oct-05/8:29 AM
3rd verse is good.
Re: a comment on Eternity by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	27-Oct-05/8:02 AM
http://www.phoenix5.org/humor/WhosOnFirstAudio.mp3 This pretty much sums it up.
Re: a comment on when i make sculpture by ay deee	ay deee 204.90.50.252	27-Oct-05/7:15 AM
thank you for the clarification, which one hangs down and which builds up?
Re: a comment on when i make sculpture by ay deee	ay deee 204.90.50.252	27-Oct-05/7:14 AM
thank you, i would hope a poem about sculpture would offer that. any in particular you enjoyed more than others?
Re: a comment on when i make sculpture by ay deee	ay deee 204.90.50.252	27-Oct-05/7:14 AM
sorry to disappoint, but perhaps i was looking for more of a tie back to the beginning rather than a climax. this seems to be a(problem?) theme in the writing i hae done lately. any suggestions?
Re: a comment on when i make sculpture by ay deee	ay deee 204.90.50.252	27-Oct-05/7:10 AM
thank you for the clarification, i do think my use of symbols is blatant (guns, genatalia, etc.)in some cases; people often get upset about it, but i suppose the symbol itslef is not blatant, just my use of it... thank you again.
Re: Every Time by pletcgm	zodiac 217.144.7.195	27-Oct-05/4:21 AM
I suggest you change the title of this poem to "Chills with Bumps". Otherwise, ace.
Re: a comment on Eternity by Dovina	zodiac 217.144.7.195	27-Oct-05/4:18 AM
I might have misrepresented AlChemy's part, who knows? I don't even remember what the original subject was. Wasn't it that none of us cared about the original subject?
Re: The cold shoulder by <~>	zodiac 217.144.7.195	27-Oct-05/4:16 AM
Awesome. The best part is you were giggling. I love it.
Re: Multiplicity the Hallucination by vulcan	oneglove 24.171.9.144	27-Oct-05/12:14 AM
huh?
Re: Tough Love by Crann Mascher	wilco 24.92.74.122	26-Oct-05/4:06 PM
Sounds like a Ween song off the 12 Golden Country Greats album....nice
Re: The cold shoulder by <~>	wilco 24.92.74.122	26-Oct-05/2:20 PM
constellation sex..
Re: when i make sculpture by ay deee	Niphredil 192.117.112.145	26-Oct-05/11:20 AM
stalactite or stalagmite, not stalagtite. :-) Good work!
Re: when i make sculpture by ay deee	<~> 167.206.181.179	26-Oct-05/10:20 AM
excellent visuals here.
Re: i hung that page to dry by FreeFormFixation	<~> 167.206.181.179	26-Oct-05/10:19 AM
the sounds in these first 5 stanzas are gorgeous!! the last two stanzas don't pack the punch the first 5 do. this is a weak simile: til all they heard from me was silence like a silent willow tree. all in all, you weaken the poem when you resolve it. ood, that.