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The cold shoulder (Free verse) by <~>
In the dream I was a huntress
mating with Orion--
muscled and fleshed--
his tunic torn in passion
it was below zero
that Vermont night
and I giggled, finished,
laying naked in the snow
and feeling no cold
as he slumped, worn,
I cradled him
but he dissipated, belt first
(he never took it off)
Betelgeuse was the last to go.
I clung to that cold shoulder
and he winked at me--
winked with all eight starsâ
and faded into night
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.25
Weighted score: 5.5066123
Overall Rank: 2649
Posted: August 16, 2002 10:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 26, 2005 7:37 AM PDT
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