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The cold shoulder (Free verse) by <~>
In the dream I was a huntress mating with Orion-- muscled and fleshed-- his tunic torn in passion it was below zero that Vermont night and I giggled, finished, laying naked in the snow and feeling no cold as he slumped, worn, I cradled him but he dissipated, belt first (he never took it off) Betelgeuse was the last to go. I clung to that cold shoulder and he winked at me-- winked with all eight stars— and faded into night

Up the ladder: Bottle collection
Down the ladder: Trapped in a horseshoe

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Arithmetic Mean: 9.25
Weighted score: 5.5066123
Overall Rank: 2649
Posted: August 16, 2002 10:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 26, 2005 7:37 AM PDT
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[8] wilco @ 24.92.74.122 | 26-Oct-05/2:20 PM | Reply
constellation sex..
[10] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 | 27-Oct-05/4:16 AM | Reply
Awesome. The best part is you were giggling. I love it.
[n/a] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 27-Oct-05/8:40 AM | Reply
Gives new meaning to the term "Cluster fuck".

First the moon now the stars is there a term for this type of sexual preference? Cosmosexual? Celestialphile?
Astro-erotica?

Nice juicy stuff you're writing.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > ALChemy | 27-Oct-05/8:50 AM | Reply
clusterfuck. heh. thanks for the laugh.
[9] Niphredil @ 192.117.121.115 | 28-Oct-05/10:05 AM | Reply
Lovely work.
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