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Every Time (Free verse) by pletcgm Every time I see you
My heart surges
Surges with feelings
Feelings of bliss
Every time I hear you
My ears are deafened
Deafened of everything
Everything but you
Every time I think of you
My mind is beset
Beset with images
Images of your beauty
Every time I touch you
My skin chills
Chills with Bumps
Bumps from knowing Iâm with you
Up the ladder:
Day Of Reckoning
Down the ladder:
Belong
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Posted: October 27, 2005 2:12 AM PDT; Last modified: October 27, 2005 2:12 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10305 Comments:
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zodiac @ 217.144.7.195
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27-Oct-05/4:21 AM
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I suggest you change the title of this poem to "Chills with Bumps". Otherwise, ace.
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