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Every Time (Free verse) by pletcgm
Every time I see you My heart surges Surges with feelings Feelings of bliss Every time I hear you My ears are deafened Deafened of everything Everything but you Every time I think of you My mind is beset Beset with images Images of your beauty Every time I touch you My skin chills Chills with Bumps Bumps from knowing I’m with you

Up the ladder: Cry...
Down the ladder: Please Stay

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10226
Posted: October 27, 2005 2:12 AM PDT; Last modified: October 27, 2005 2:12 AM PDT
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[6] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 | 27-Oct-05/4:21 AM | Reply
I suggest you change the title of this poem to "Chills with Bumps". Otherwise, ace.
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