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Every Time (Free verse) by pletcgm

Every time I see you My heart surges Surges with feelings Feelings of bliss Every time I hear you My ears are deafened Deafened of everything Everything but you Every time I think of you My mind is beset Beset with images Images of your beauty Every time I touch you My skin chills Chills with Bumps Bumps from knowing I’m with you

zodiac 27-Oct-05/4:21 AM
I suggest you change the title of this poem to "Chills with Bumps". Otherwise, ace.




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