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Acoustics (Free verse) by oneglove It sounds so lovely
Resonating through the strings
Your stolen heart
Tapping in time
The broken chorus
Tugging at each string
Tuning your heart
To just the right key
The honesty
So calculated
The exposure
A facade
Those baby blues
Hidden behind dark locks
Youâre looking in
But how much can you see?
Heâll sing you to sleep, love
Heâll sing you to sleep
Up the ladder:
Bridges
Down the ladder:
Of the Lady on the Bridge
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Posted: October 26, 2005 11:27 PM PDT; Last modified: October 26, 2005 11:27 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9191 Comments:
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
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27-Oct-05/8:29 AM
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3rd verse is good.
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