poemranker ::Acoustics by oneglove

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Free verse № 132559

Acoustics

Member since 2004 · Posted 26 Oct 2005 · 1 comment

It sounds so lovely Resonating through the strings Your stolen heart Tapping in time The broken chorus Tugging at each string Tuning your heart To just the right key The honesty So calculated The exposure A facade Those baby blues Hidden behind dark locks You’re looking in But how much can you see? He’ll sing you to sleep, love He’ll sing you to sleep

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[n/a] ALChemy 27-Oct-05/8:29 AM Reply
3rd verse is good.