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Acoustics (Free verse) by oneglove

It sounds so lovely Resonating through the strings Your stolen heart Tapping in time The broken chorus Tugging at each string Tuning your heart To just the right key The honesty So calculated The exposure A facade Those baby blues Hidden behind dark locks You’re looking in But how much can you see? He’ll sing you to sleep, love He’ll sing you to sleep

ALChemy 27-Oct-05/8:29 AM
3rd verse is good.




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