Dovina
on not to settle for less than almost obliteration by ay deee
14 Nov 2005, 12:45 PM
The last line seems anti-theme. Being consumed and pushing don't quite go together.
A Right Brain cannot get this I know, but reading your poems quickens the synapses, releasing the fluids, like squeezing blood out of silicone. Never change your style, only grammar sometimes and maybe the occasional hint of logic.
If I were to put a hundred and twenty anthropologists in a bag. Forty believing there was such thing as race and eighty believing there was not. How many anthropologists would I have to pull out to be sure of at least two agreeing. In the light of this is your correspondence with DA really worth a 'at least we agree... that is more than your average'?
ALChemy
replying on not to settle for less than almost obliteration by ay deee
14 Nov 2005, 10:49 AM
We must not forget his turn in gay porn in Batman Forever.
plagiarism
n 1: a piece of writing that has been copied from someone else and is presented as being your own work 2: the act of plagiarizing; taking someone's words or ideas as if they were your own
What's even funnier is that it's immediately preceeded by an even more popular cliche, "Shall be performed in twinkling of an eye."
I shit you not.
D. Faustus is like cliche reference book.
At risk of this conversation turning to fawning mush, yes. That one line's as good as the entire rest of Val's career, even including Willow.
ALChemy
replying on not to settle for less than almost obliteration by ay deee
14 Nov 2005, 10:28 AM
I loved that line in that movie. I always use it and people are just like, "huh?".
"Imprisoned from my ribs"?
I'm sure you have an explanation why you used "from" rather than "in" or "by". I'll save you the trouble. It doesn't work.
There's no easy way to say this: I think it doesn't work.
I'll tell you, most people are going to think Val Kilmer in Tombstone saying "Ah'm your huckleberry."
engaged in, causing, or encouraging the consumption of food, materials, or goods, especially in a wasteful or destructive way
that's pretty close, especially: materials, destructive
not speaking of tuberculosis
it is a great word, thank you
i like his mustache
i know what the other version is, i thought i'd make it my own
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Yes, but as a nonbeliever, it doesn't count if I say it.