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zodiac replying on Us Sinners by BrandonW 17 Nov 2005, 4:53 AM
The more I think about it, the more I think The Rapture is the point where Dovina and I converge. And just imagine me as David "Recently-abandoned-his-Harvard-PhD-for-acting" Duchovny and Dovina as Mimi "Customer-service-call-center-drone" Rogers cruising the furniture showrooms of the internet for willing swingers. I love it. I'd love to ask her what she thinks of the movie, but I'm pretty sure the preceding has made her scared to watch it. Watch.
cyan9 replying on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9 17 Nov 2005, 3:10 AM
Are we at an end of the match?
cyan9 replying on Haven by cyan9 17 Nov 2005, 3:08 AM
Its not an everyday request, but go on....
cyan9 replying on Haven by cyan9 17 Nov 2005, 3:08 AM
I will take this as a less than serious addition to the less than serious slanging match that we have had, which, irritating and amusing as it has been, should end soon. I have written the response below in retort to the argument that you have given in jest here, rather than you (much as it does use the word ‘you’).I do not expect a response. This argument is invalid and is a form of submission. You have fielded your uncertainty in yourself by not stating your degree. You have fielded your uncertainty in yourself by not fielding an argument; instead you have tried to force people to believe that your un-stated arguments are more valid, by trying to imply that you have an accolade that you may or may not have received. I have two problems with this: (i) There is no way of verifying your degree status on the internet; and thus it must be considered invalid. The validity must come from mutual acceptance of the argument. (ii) By putting yourself at a point at which you believe that your opinions are more valid, since you have a degree, you show that you do not question your own validity in this area, and thus are less credible than a person who does. I would also query the suggestion that having a degree in an area conventionally considered creative may lead to enhanced appreciation of creativity, especially from what I have seen of so called Doctors in these fields. I would state that from my own personal experience, creativity and its appreciation comes from a combination of self-expansion, pro-activity within ones mind, and humility; most certainly not from time spent in the classroom following curriculum alone. Those that field this kind of argument are revealing that they have placed themselves higher than everyone else, without nothing of substance beneath them, in order to hold them, or break their fall.
cyan9 replying on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9 17 Nov 2005, 1:20 AM
In seriousness is this true? (little time for matters of eternity)
BrandonW on Frenulum by BrandonW 16 Nov 2005, 11:15 PM
The one on the bottom of my tongue is always raw or sore the next day because it rubs against my bottom teeth so much.
BrandonW replying on Frenulum by BrandonW 16 Nov 2005, 11:13 PM
"A frenulum (or frenum) is a small fold of tissue that prevents an organ in the body from moving too far. There are frenula at several points of the body, including several in the mouth (frenulum linguae, f. labii superioris, f. labii inferioris of the tongue, upper and lower lips respectively), some in the digestive tract, and some connected to the external genitalia. In the female these include the frenulum clitoridis of the clitoris and the frenulum labiorum pudendi (aka. fourchette) where the labia minora meet at the back. The word frenulum on its own is often used for the frenulum preputii penis, which is an elastic band of tissue under the glans penis that connects to the prepuce and helps contract the prepuce over the glans. It is often partially or totally removed during circumcision. When short or tight it may prevent normal retraction and inhibit normal sexual activity."
TLRufener replying on The Gate of Heaven by TLRufener 16 Nov 2005, 8:55 PM
I just wrote to let you know I was, in fact, a woman; since you refered to me as 'he' and 'him.'
Dovina replying on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy 16 Nov 2005, 8:26 PM
I am cute, but not short. Cute can be acquired, short cannot. In that lie all the reasons for politics and religion.
Dovina on Aurora by Aetius 16 Nov 2005, 8:06 PM
I see no point in shrouding a thing like this. In allowing several ingterpretations, you do what I do, and incur the consternation of me. maybe you meant something particuar, maybe nebulosity. It seems to me that a poem should at least purport something, not paint lines pointing in all directions. It's ok if readers find other meanings, but some meaning should stand our like a basket of fruit or a tree.
Dovina replying on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9 16 Nov 2005, 7:53 PM
As for the biting comments, I have little time to spare for matters of eternity, finding the slanging matches between teenage poetry snobs of higher importance. My comments are more of an irritated response to the image that you and zodiac have presented. I welcome the chance to receive feedback on my work, and get distinctly annoyed when I receive time waisting comments.
ALChemy replying on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9 16 Nov 2005, 7:44 PM
Thanks for the info. It should come in handy.
Dovina replying on Haven by cyan9 16 Nov 2005, 7:40 PM
Yez sthir, already dun
Dovina replying on Racism by Dovina 16 Nov 2005, 7:37 PM
Neither do I, but in the interest of diversity, I sometimes enjoy the company of gays, transvestites, Lesbians, Christians, and egotists.
ALChemy replying on Haven by cyan9 16 Nov 2005, 7:30 PM
Drink one for me darlin'.
Dovina replying on Haven by cyan9 16 Nov 2005, 7:30 PM
I have two legs, and can't stand on either of them for very long.
ALChemy replying on Haven by cyan9 16 Nov 2005, 7:29 PM
Do you have a degree in anything creative related? Nope, didn't think so. You officially have no leg to stand on.
Dovina replying on Haven by cyan9 16 Nov 2005, 7:28 PM
I have two legs, and can't stand on either of them for very long.
ALChemy replying on Racism by Dovina 16 Nov 2005, 7:27 PM
"Ah'm black and Ah'm proud"
Dovina on Frenulum by BrandonW 16 Nov 2005, 7:26 PM
A device linking the front wings to the back, hardly seems like a flame or disease. Is she enjoying this?