| Re: a comment on Escape by raven_the_poet |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
14-Feb-06/10:49 AM |
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The Raven is and always will be the icon of poetry. But did you know there's strong evidence linking the man to a murder of, I believe, a matchstick-selling girl?
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| Re: a comment on A Midnight Call by amanda_dcosta |
ALChemy 24.74.100.11 |
14-Feb-06/10:49 AM |
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Are you Latin? You treat guys like Latin women treat guys.
I pretty much agree with Z about losing the intro and exit lines.
You're at your best when you're not trying to rhyme, when you just write about what you know and let it flow.
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| Re: The Struggling Poet's Lament by Ranger |
amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.37 |
14-Feb-06/10:48 AM |
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Ranger, I've just stumbled upon your poem, more like... I looked for your latest poem. It's good, but I will comment on it more tomorrow hopefully. It's pretty late... I could do with some beauty sleep. Nighto...
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| Re: a comment on In response to by INTRANSIT |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
14-Feb-06/10:47 AM |
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Now that is dedicated detectoring! I wouldn't have even tried finding a name for the suspect; merely referred to him as Orange Award Nominee #1
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| Re: a comment on In response to by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
14-Feb-06/10:45 AM |
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The imposter uses and lower-case "l" instead of INTRANSIT's upper-case "I". The IP implicates Fraser Allonby, the same who has immitated me on various occasions.
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| Re: a comment on In response to by INTRANSIT |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
14-Feb-06/10:43 AM |
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These username duplicators are getting cleverer by the day...
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| Re: a comment on In response to by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
14-Feb-06/10:40 AM |
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No, you're right. INTRANSIT posted the poem, but the comments are by an imposter. Good call.
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| Re: a comment on A Midnight Call by amanda_dcosta |
amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.37 |
14-Feb-06/10:40 AM |
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Ranger, I respect others' opinions and beliefs ( ie. I don't object to it), but I don't necessarily believe theirs. All the same, as long as I don't let myself be influenced by everyword or comment or judgement that whirls around me...i'm doing great.
Besides, I noted that he liked my poem and was grateful that he read it.
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| Re: a comment on In response to by INTRANSIT |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
14-Feb-06/10:39 AM |
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Look at the name of the chap who left the 'Fuck (X)' comments. Then click it to the profile page. It's not INTRANSIT. Not by a long way.
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| Re: Winter Wonderland by raven_the_poet |
edgar-allen-poe-rox 70.174.119.18 |
14-Feb-06/10:38 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Happy 40th Anniversary by Dovina |
ALChemy 24.74.100.11 |
14-Feb-06/10:38 AM |
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I thought it was a great line. I just wanted to give you some kind of answer. What I found I think is quite amazing.
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| Re: She Doesn't Love Me. by edgar-allen-poe-rox |
raven_the_poet 216.45.130.159 |
14-Feb-06/10:37 AM |
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| Re: a comment on In response to by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
14-Feb-06/10:36 AM |
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Hou could it be wanker? All the old poems are INTRANSIT's.
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| Re: Down on Dogs by Bobjim |
raven_the_poet 216.45.130.159 |
14-Feb-06/10:34 AM |
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Wow. hahaha you are a wonderful poet
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| Re: Down on Dogs by Bobjim |
edgar-allen-poe-rox 70.174.119.18 |
14-Feb-06/10:34 AM |
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i vote ten for being humorous and ten for poetic talent.
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| Re: Escape by raven_the_poet |
ALChemy 24.74.100.11 |
14-Feb-06/10:33 AM |
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Sonnets should contain at least one identifiable characteristic of a formal sonnet. See E. A. Poe Rox's poem and read the comment I left for him. Goog luck Raven.
I look forward to posts from both of you.
Ps. And yes I think Poe rox too.
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| Re: Winter Wonderland by raven_the_poet |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
14-Feb-06/10:33 AM |
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Sounds like something that would suit a villanelle, with a little expansion.
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| Re: a comment on Happy 40th Anniversary by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
14-Feb-06/10:33 AM |
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The 40 is redundant. Yes, I could do that - thanks.
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| Re: a comment on A Midnight Call by amanda_dcosta |
amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.37 |
14-Feb-06/10:31 AM |
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Tell me Al, you're getting worked up about this... aren't you. I meant no harm, but I won't apologize. You were fresh bait after you claimed your title...... nothing personal to that. It's just that you followed up on every remark very well. I was quite amused with your opening statement.
Now cool down and tell me, like a good boy, what you think of my poem. I could use some positive insight from you.
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| Re: Dear flatulance (dear lord) by Bobjim |
raven_the_poet 216.45.130.159 |
14-Feb-06/10:29 AM |
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omg. freaking hilarious. XD
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