| Re: David & Derrick by TheModestKing |
wDaphnew 85.210.7.225 |
25-Sep-11/11:50 AM |
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This was quite good but something has gone wrong with the apostrophes - they come out as an a with a circumflex on top!
No such typo problems at MY website, so accept my invitation to join:
http://newpoetryshared.proboards.com
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| Re: The Owl in the Wasteland by Caducus |
wDaphnew 85.210.7.225 |
25-Sep-11/11:48 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina |
Dovina 208.127.227.170 |
16-Sep-11/3:38 PM |
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From halfway around the globe, an answer comes
Are we the only three?
Where are they, those pundits for poetic improvement?
are they busy, or just dead?
become stiff-shirt bigots maybe
tossed out the truths they yelled for
traitors all, and cowards!
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| Re: Munnar -a must -see destination by Jessina |
amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.239 |
16-Sep-11/1:25 PM |
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I know Munnar... so I can connect with its landscape. but from just the description, it doesn't take me there poetically, although you may rhyme. While reading it I was looking for something that would make me say WOW as in 'yes, this is the poetry-inspiring MUNNAR'.... apart from the generalized description that every traveler to Munnar posts. I know you added some adjectives to describe it, but sometimes the reader wants more than a description. We want to find the poet in the poem.
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| Re: Help! by Dovina |
amanda_dcosta 82.178.136.239 |
16-Sep-11/1:18 PM |
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Across the Atlantic and Indian Oceans
or the Pacific, the other way round....
sound waves travel.
I hear you.
-10- for the message! :)
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| Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina |
nentwined 66.74.95.0 |
14-Sep-11/12:46 PM |
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Don't really know "and all". I presume the dark angel contingent graduated. I fell out of phase, and then got more serious about poetry (and trying to get paid for it, which precluded posting anything to poemranker). And maybe it's just too bogged down, maybe the voting (ranking?) needs some other scale measure, ... probably things that are more recent should get precedence in terms of what get shown.
Got some free google advertising money today, tossing half of it at poemranker to see if anything happens.
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| Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina |
Dovina 208.127.227.170 |
14-Sep-11/12:27 PM |
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Speaking of the world, What the hell happened? The ranker and all?
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| Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina |
nentwined 66.74.95.0 |
14-Sep-11/12:09 PM |
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depends on the time of day, or how far the collective stick-up-ass is. senryu... or sure. I'd leave a high vote on it. Ah, the end of the world....
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| Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina |
Dovina 208.127.227.170 |
14-Sep-11/12:07 PM |
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Classy enough to call it a haiku?
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| Re: Help! by Dovina |
nentwined 66.74.95.0 |
14-Sep-11/11:19 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Poemranker is Back! by Dovina |
nentwined 66.74.95.0 |
14-Sep-11/11:18 AM |
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hmm. it looks like that wasn't me. I hope that wasn't me. ah, the intricacies and confuse-ancies of poemranker... ;)
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| Re: Dashes of Deers can Hears by T. Jonathron Remp |
nentwined 66.74.95.0 |
14-Sep-11/10:47 AM |
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the rhyming! I'm blinded by the rhyming!
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| Re: a comment on He hit me over the head with a by T. Jonathron Remp |
T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.80.117 |
5-Sep-11/12:54 AM |
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Oh, sorry. I'll rephrase: I hope that in the last 6 years you have died of throat cancer.
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| Re: a comment on Regterezone: Dosh. by T. Jonathron Remp |
T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.80.117 |
5-Sep-11/12:35 AM |
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care to capitalize properly?
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| Re: a comment on Regterezone: Dosh. by T. Jonathron Remp |
T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.80.117 |
5-Sep-11/12:35 AM |
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care to capitalize properly?
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| Re: Regterezone: Dosh. by T. Jonathron Remp |
nypoet22 75.74.75.115 |
16-Aug-11/3:41 PM |
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care to post an english translation?
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| Re: Counting by Dovina |
nypoet22 75.74.75.115 |
12-Aug-11/9:57 AM |
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i think is among your best.
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| Re: David & Derrick by TheModestKing |
nypoet22 75.74.75.115 |
12-Aug-11/8:32 AM |
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the first line is great, but the rest lacks specifics. what behavior? kill what? drink what?
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| Re: a comment on True Love by Jessina |
nypoet22 75.74.75.115 |
12-Aug-11/8:27 AM |
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wow, don't hold back, tell us what you REALLY think! :)
i'd say true love is cherishing and accepting each other as we really are, which includes the lovemaking, the ass-wiping and everything in between. i got a kick out of your imagery though.
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| Re: The Owl in the Wasteland by Caducus |
nypoet22 75.74.75.115 |
12-Aug-11/8:13 AM |
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i like the word use and images. thirsting for a babe that sleeps in the sun's fleece, our bones become hands shaped at midnight, let dusk hatch us silver. super. this would be a nine or a ten, but the very last line seems not to fit at all.
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